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Published: 2010-05-28 20:29:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1210; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 33
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Description CONTAINS SPOILERS FOR DRAWN TO LIFE, DO NOT READ IF YOU HAVE NOT FINISHED THE FIRST GAME!!!

"DAD! NO!!!"
Mari screamed dashing forward as her fathers lifeless body began to fade.

But she wasn't fast enough.

Just as she knelt down beside him, the Mayor's outline disappeared in a soft, shimmering light.
Mari placed her hands on the spot were he had been and began to weep.

Jowee stepped forward, his eyes watered in sorrow as he gently touched her trembling shoulder.

"Mari...I..."

Before he could say anymore, Mari jumped up and turned to Doodle who was watching from a few paces away.

"You should have protected him!!!" She shouted furiously

Doodle's face lit with shock before melting into grief.

"I'm sorry, Mari... I didn't... I didn't know..."

"You SHOULD have known!!!" Mari yelled rushing up to him.
"You should have been there to save him!" "Your useless Doodle! USELESS!!!

Without pausing for Doodle's reaction Mari turned and raced through the trees. Ignoring Jowee as he called out for her to stop.
The whole village seemed to blur around her as she ran, as If it wasn't even real... Her thoughts tumbled inside her head so much she could barley comprehend them herself.

"This wasn't supposed to happen!"

"Dad wasn't supposed to die!"

"I'm not ready to be mayor!"

"Its not fair! Its not fair!!!"

She began to slow when she realized were her feet had taken her. Looking up to see the trees that hid the path to the secret beach.
Slowly, she wove her way around them and stepped out onto the cool sand.

"Dad loved this place as much as I did..." she said as she remembered how he had smiled when he saw the beautiful view for the first time.
"But the last thing we did together was fight..."

A sudden dreadful thought crossed her mind.

She remember what the Creator told them in Creation Hall before the hero was brought into the world.
She had warned them that the mayor was in danger.

"I thought she was warning us about how Wilfre had trapped dad in the Snow Fields... But maybe... She meant this!"

Stepping farther onto the beach so that she could feel the spray from the sea, Mari looked out to the fiery colored horizon as its light sparkled on the dark ocean waves.

"You knew."

"You knew this would happen..."

"So why...?"

She fell to her knees holding back a choking sob. Placing her hands together to pray.

"Creator... Why did you take my dad?"

The only answer was the sound of the sea's gentile waves.


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This is for she requested Mari praying on the Secret Beach! This is one of the hardest traditional drawings I've ever done. I literally colored a hole sheet of paper. My poor colored pencils...
She didn't request the story, but I wanted to, just because she's such an awesome person! ^^

I decided to use the scene from the game were Mari's father died as inspiration.
I always felt that scene was lacking in emotion, I think they should have spent more time on that part of the game.
Thats why I just had to write in out to see if It could executed better through Mari's point of view.

I used Tayono's character Doodle as the hero in the writing part, cuz I felt like it was a good fit for him. I also made Tayono the creator in case none of you caught the hint. ^^

I dont really like how I wrote this... But Im quite proud of the colors in the picture. Thats my first sunset I ever colored.
I hope you all like it! Tell me how I did!
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Comments: 32

GoodfellaZeta [2018-05-05 03:30:27 +0000 UTC]

...you father was very old mari...it was painful to even breathe for him...but with me pain cannot exist...besides you will never be alone.

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Mirrorbeam [2015-08-21 18:15:55 +0000 UTC]

it was 5th cell's fault mari. blame them not me. or wilfre cus he's too adorable...

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PrincessFaeron [2013-12-26 21:00:00 +0000 UTC]

nice picture (i'm not going to read the description because i haven't finished the game but I've played the second one so i know mari's dad must have died)

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WTFlolololtroll [2013-06-01 22:28:53 +0000 UTC]

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Mullerlarco [2012-08-24 19:47:54 +0000 UTC]

I wanna cry

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TumiaArtStudio [2011-06-30 03:07:45 +0000 UTC]

Dude would you look at this awesome sunset coloring? awesome

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Bubblesnuffer In reply to TumiaArtStudio [2011-07-13 20:42:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I worked very hard on it.

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TumiaArtStudio In reply to Bubblesnuffer [2011-07-14 01:58:48 +0000 UTC]

i can tell. hard work really does pay off.

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sixteen6stars [2010-06-03 15:39:54 +0000 UTC]

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai
dee cut the secret beachts
out of the next chapter Game
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAi
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai

i love the secret beachts

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Bubblesnuffer In reply to sixteen6stars [2010-06-06 08:32:26 +0000 UTC]

I know... They didnt even show it ONCE!
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIII!!!!!!

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sixteen6stars [2010-05-29 09:36:39 +0000 UTC]

you are the Artmaster

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Bubblesnuffer In reply to sixteen6stars [2010-05-30 03:44:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow! Thank you so much!

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sixteen6stars [2010-05-29 09:35:51 +0000 UTC]

the secret Beachs
HITS PERFECT

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tayono [2010-05-28 23:20:17 +0000 UTC]

OH..MY...GOD...

It's beautiful! I LOVE IT! And I loooove the story you added to it! I feel so flattered that you put Doodle in it!

I love it, Bubble. It's just what I wanted and more!

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Bubblesnuffer In reply to tayono [2010-05-29 06:25:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad you like it!!!
NYAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! Overwhelming happiness!!!

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tayono In reply to Bubblesnuffer [2010-05-29 13:40:00 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could fave this amillion times. Really.

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Bubblesnuffer In reply to tayono [2010-05-30 03:59:29 +0000 UTC]

Daaawwww! Your too much!

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redweavile [2010-05-28 20:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow...thats beautiful...
*insta-fave*

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Bubblesnuffer In reply to redweavile [2010-05-30 03:47:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

Dude! *Insta-fave* is the coolest saying ever!

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redweavile In reply to Bubblesnuffer [2010-05-30 11:42:34 +0000 UTC]

XD Hey, no problem.

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kylexstanfan [2010-05-28 20:35:51 +0000 UTC]

I loved the story you threw in with it!

Maybe you should write a story about what happened in Drawn To Life and Drawn To Life The Next Chapter,I'd totally read it!

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Bubblesnuffer In reply to kylexstanfan [2010-05-29 06:28:37 +0000 UTC]

You really think so?

Tayono --->:icontaoyono: is already novelizing the second game Reeeally well.
But maybe someday I could try to write the first game... or the wii game!
It will most likely not happen for a looong time, but Thanks for the inspiration!

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kylexstanfan In reply to Bubblesnuffer [2010-05-30 04:10:12 +0000 UTC]

I just read it,it's awesome!

You're welcome~

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zEn5xya [2010-05-28 20:34:30 +0000 UTC]

It's awesome, and I really like the sunset! But the only problem I have with the picture, is Mari's expression. She's supposed to be sad about her father's passing, and it's looks like she is smiling, which doesn't make sense. Unless she was going nuts. But Mari's sensible (and I still think she's annoying) so she wouldn't probably go nuts.Other than that it's really cool!

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Bubblesnuffer In reply to zEn5xya [2010-05-30 03:46:18 +0000 UTC]

*looks*

omg...It DOES!
my scanner made it look weird, in the real picture she looks very sad.

Lol...I now have an image of a crazy psycho Mari in my head!

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zEn5xya In reply to Bubblesnuffer [2010-05-30 12:22:38 +0000 UTC]

LOL Crazy psycho mari...
Mari:

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Bubblesnuffer In reply to zEn5xya [2010-06-01 05:45:31 +0000 UTC]

LMAO! Someone needs to draw that!

Mari: HAHAHAHA! I finally rid of the old man! Quick Wilfre, Lets run away together!
Jowee: O_O

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WTFlolololtroll In reply to Bubblesnuffer [2013-06-01 22:32:01 +0000 UTC]

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!

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kylexstanfan In reply to Bubblesnuffer [2010-06-12 07:06:44 +0000 UTC]

IT HAS BEEN CREATED,BBY.

[link]

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zEn5xya In reply to Bubblesnuffer [2010-06-01 08:14:05 +0000 UTC]

Jowee: Mari, you've betrayed me! BOO HOO!
Mari:

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Bubblesnuffer In reply to zEn5xya [2010-06-01 08:26:34 +0000 UTC]

Jowee: Stop making that creepy face!!! o_O
Mari:

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zEn5xya In reply to Bubblesnuffer [2010-06-01 08:29:00 +0000 UTC]

Jowee: -backs away slowly-
Mari: (:<

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