Comments: 23
toraketsu [2010-02-13 04:07:33 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, it's really pretty! :3
I really love the textures you used on her clothes - it makes them feel very realistic.
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SempaiDy [2009-07-13 05:17:26 +0000 UTC]
omfg, so beautiful!! outstanding!!
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"When life gives you lemons, squeeze them into the eyes of the jerk who gave them to you and demand the oranges you asked for!"
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Bubydub In reply to SempaiDy [2009-07-13 11:54:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
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SempaiDy In reply to Bubydub [2009-07-13 18:30:18 +0000 UTC]
ur welcome! ^^
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Jeternity [2009-02-12 15:05:38 +0000 UTC]
Well a very nice picture! The coloers are very clear and strong. The shading is well ,too.
But I think her arms are a bit too short mostly her right arm. That is all I have to critique.
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Bubydub In reply to Jeternity [2009-02-13 01:32:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
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Jeternity In reply to Bubydub [2009-02-13 09:08:38 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome.
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icequeenserenity [2008-04-09 04:24:08 +0000 UTC]
This is a beautiful illustration! I LOVE the texture on her clothing!
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xslightlyINSANEx [2008-03-23 21:17:04 +0000 UTC]
beautiful! i love all the texturing in the sails and such, and the glimmer of the metals, and the glimmer of her hair, is amazing. the placement of the girl in relationship to the ships and land is very appealing to the eye...you must have planned this out very well or just have an instinctive ability to know where things look good being placed :]
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hanyaanfaery [2008-03-21 01:09:19 +0000 UTC]
I really love the color schemes you're using! It's so bright and awesome. It looks a little stiff, and some of the shading doesn't quite follow human anatomy/isn't rounded enough, but on the whole this is a lovely piece and I can't wait to see more from you since you just keep getting better.
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Katsumiyo [2008-03-20 04:56:42 +0000 UTC]
Nice work! It looks very collected and together, which is hard for pictures with backgrounds and this much detail. I think her skin looks a little too red; you started with good base colors, but the red is too vibrant in the darker areas. The face is amazing, but the hair could use a little more depth--a lot of it seems to be mostly shadow and wisps and strands, so all that dark area needs more detail. Her pose is a little awkward; I think her left (our right) arm would actually be placed higher than her right. Her right arm look good, the shoulder's a little too rounded, but the left arm's upper length is too long, so the elbow starts too low. For the background, I think you should keep the same color gradient, but paint it in yourself because the details in the filter are distracting. It also seems like a very open picture, so maybe make the land more distant or get rid of it entirely.
I'm not sure whether this is just me, but it seems like the foreground has really warm colors and the background is much cooler, so maybe add some yellow into the sky (near the horizon, perhaps?) or cool down the tones of her skin to balance it out.
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Bubydub In reply to Katsumiyo [2008-03-21 01:20:39 +0000 UTC]
Thanks alot for the critque! I really appreciate it. : D
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Bubydub In reply to Tanuu [2008-03-20 05:19:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
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Bubydub In reply to Vielara [2008-03-20 02:10:32 +0000 UTC]
Yaay thank you! Har har har, used mah chakrams as reference. XD
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