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Buddhu23 — Fia - Riviera
Published: 2007-02-10 01:11:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1733; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 79
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Beware, it's rather large. Just a drawing I did a while ago, submitted, but took down because I wanted to revise it. There are still some things bothering me, but...Critique encouraged, but please give helpful tips.
Also, if you favorite or download, I'd really appreciate it if you could leave some feedback.
Fia - copyright...the Riviera people
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feedback? i love Fiaa and she needs more fans. Thanks for drawing her.
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I love it!
but someow, I remembered Saber from Fate/stay night....
Fiaa is my favorite too!
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Fia's the best of the girls in terms of overall package, I would say. I like the pose, the dark hair contrasts with the clouds, and the only criticism I have is of the neck, which is too thin.
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Thanks! And after you pointed it out, it's really starting to bother me... I may have to re-do it and actually put her in the right clothes..
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Well, don't redo it, unless you mean making a completely new one. This one isn't bad at all.
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I might make another one. I was thinking of just taking what I had, changing the clothes and recoloring it. Oh, and changing the hair, too...
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That's basically everything except her body structure and the background.
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wow nice pic, though i don't think Fia's hair is that dark green...more like light green
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I <3 Fia! My favorite girl in Riviera. Great pic!
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errr... I'm not much help as a critic but my only sugguestion is about the cloud by adding some shadows hmm to make it a bit puffy I guess 
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AHHH I LOVE FIA!!! THIS LOOKS SOOOOOOOO AWESOME!!!
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NO PROBLEM!! By the way go to my main page and look in my favorites youll find someone elses picture of Fia Half naked!!! It looks absolutley HOT!!!!
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Wait, Fia from Riviera: The Promised Land? Yes! I love that game. And here I was starting to think almost nobody played it.
Well, since you asked for a critique, I'd say that the hair is shaded a little off. I can't really place my finger on it but it seems kind of, I dunno how to describe it, plastic-y. Maybe it's a little too smooth.
But overall, It's a nice pic. I like it.
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Yay, another Rivifan~
Thanks for the comment...it was my first ever cged piece, and I most definitely have problems with it.
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Well, I don't know the character or 'Riviera', but this is a really cool work. =] The colors all work together nicely, the highlights on the dress are awesome, and are those clouds shaped like a person?
The only thing I could say would be to play around with some textures so the dress would look more satin-ish. I'm personally scared of textures... they don't like me. Though I'm scared of all digital media, so my opinion doesn't really count. ^w^;
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Thank you~
>< I have no idea how to do anything with textures. It was all done by mouse. Also, Riviera is a videogame for the GBA...I would recommend it to everyone.
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I love the sky, the hair and the purple dress! The purple is really pretty and i like the highlights. I'm not in much of a posistion to give advice, but perhaps make her neck a little larger?
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haha, yeah, that's the one thing people seem to notice. Thanks for the advice *jots down notes* They actually aren't her real clothes, I just couldn't draw them right...that's one of the revisions I hope to make. At any rate, thanks for your comment~
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