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bugsymoron — Indomitable Spirit
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Published: 2008-04-17 18:42:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 193; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description
I realized in realityto feel alive you must feel fear
No comfort zone in sight of you
but within earshot of a thumping heart
rocking knees, shuffling feet
rooting you down as you breathe
and making life unbearably mean
When a perfect dream exists in your mind
but it won't release
unless you take effort into time
and now... just let... go.
I want to show you on - because I know,
you can prove to me YOU ARE.
What my heart feels when it sings
when noone else is around
is a damn precious thought i hold
when Im caught in the clutches of uglies
with cherubic smiles and open arms
dissolving against me as I take a fall.
Finally, all I will ever have
is my liberating song, so then
why should I not let it sing on?
Exhilarating hope of finding fear
leading me over Everest's bumps
and onto conquering My Mountain.
I die being refreshingly alive.
while they below
will never know.
Comments: 2
Ah yeah, in each of the three stanzas the voice talking changes slightly but it definitely does
Well in the first stanza it's more addressing everybody who is confused by fear. The second I've started this soliloquy with myself and am slowly building on my confidence and what I have really to lose. And in the last stanza it's the most personal, I have found my center and it's the most open of the three stanzas to "others" that's people who want inspiration and people who are just sitting on their asses who say all the crap about you and laugh at you for trying but never attempted what you did themselves, the cowards.
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<3 indeed. This is great. . .but maybe you could make your intended audience more specific? Is this to "the others"? To yourself?
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