Comments: 13
kyler91599 [2021-01-06 03:24:40 +0000 UTC]
I love this story. The details and buildup are amazing. The aftermath is something you don't seem often that I love. The idea of a juiced person is always something that interests me. The characters were great. Really surprised kylie didn't get fat or anything. It was refreshing to see someone go through the factory like that and come out alright.
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Rafafex1302 [2020-02-03 17:24:41 +0000 UTC]
i am loving your stories. You are the best author of blueberry stories I know. You highlight, and write in detail throughout the process of the girl turning blue and describe inflation perfectly. Please don't stop creating new stories, you have a gift
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pieman117 [2020-01-06 02:25:05 +0000 UTC]
This was really well written. Loved the ending. The aftermath of a transformation is such an under used idea.
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bullfrog503 In reply to pieman117 [2020-01-08 04:41:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I've always been fascinated with what the girls would do next. It's not like their lives can just go back to normal
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pieman117 In reply to bullfrog503 [2020-01-08 15:42:22 +0000 UTC]
Couldn't agree more. I really appreciate you writing something with that concept. To me it's the much more interesting part.
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Storyfan134 [2019-04-19 17:48:21 +0000 UTC]
Really good story, I like the build up during her chewing
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Marietheunikingdomer [2019-04-17 22:53:04 +0000 UTC]
Niiiice! A blueberry story with a juicy, dark, yet happy ending! Very nice work!
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