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Yachi-Yachi [2014-05-01 23:37:38 +0000 UTC]

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Hello again, BonnieBunniChu! I hope you don't mind me making another critique on your artwork? I just like to help is all. Anyway, here goes...

First off, the character looks very cute in her posing, and in the way you have designed her face. The eyes give off an innocent vibe that ties in well with the character, and it really gives a good in look into what her personality might be like. The face is generally well structured for the style you are using, and it overall adds to her cute appearance. I would suggest possibly adding in some eyebrows (even if they are covered by the hair) to add to the face.

The hair is drawn well as well, it is soft and fits in with the overall design. The shading is nice as well, once again, not to soft, not to sharp. I really like the way you've done the shine here as well, including a softer shine as well as a brighter one, if that makes sense.

Now onto the body...I don't know if it's just the style you're going for, but it seems a little off if you pay too much attention. Maybe it would look more affective if her body was facing the right side more. The proportions are pretty good, and I assume this is a young character so it makes sense, so well done there.

Overall, this is a well made drawing, with just a few improvements to be made. Keep up the awesome work, and I hope this critique helps you. c:

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NekoRinaArt [2014-04-29 01:45:34 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww omg what a cutie!!! >////< thank you so much for drawing her <3

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DazzlingEnd [2014-04-26 16:00:32 +0000 UTC]

Very cute! I love the colouring you did on her hair

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