Comments: 11
mistygurl27 [2008-06-26 06:41:31 +0000 UTC]
i love this story, its really good
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Athazagoraphobias [2007-10-01 08:43:25 +0000 UTC]
Sakura always annoyed me. They only lasted for a week, maybe two, and then it was all a mess of petals rotting away, squashed and ground into the pavement...
The part when Kastu wakes up and finds that it was really her in a coma confuses me. Was it Katsu or Sakura in the coma? Who was really dreaming, and did either of them acctually wake?
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bunnysquirrel8 In reply to Athazagoraphobias [2007-10-02 00:14:13 +0000 UTC]
It was actually Katsu dreaming (as he was in a coma). I do understand you're confusion, though, it's a tad bit hard for me to get my point across for that moment. So if it's confusing, I apologize.
I've never actually seen sakura (in Japan) but in the US there are a billion cherry trees around where I live, so I know what you mean about the squishy rotting. But I always found it so pretty. But I'm really glad for your input, it helps me keep in mind that I've got a lot of work to do as a writer.
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Linnzy [2007-09-09 17:57:26 +0000 UTC]
It is....it's...it's stunginnly amazing!
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Nicktroptopolis [2007-09-05 23:05:04 +0000 UTC]
I liked that twist. I didn't really expect it, and it was quite moving, which equals a nice little story
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SumthingIsOutThere [2007-09-05 20:54:44 +0000 UTC]
thats ... touching... i realy like it.. gonna put in my favs
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