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Burning-Sins — Possession
Published: 2006-01-03 11:33:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 262; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 16
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Description I won’t try to sleep again,
Because I know they’re coming back.
I just heard the door slam,
And I feel a presence close to me.
Although there’s nobody here,
What are these whispers in my ear?
They know how to excite my fear,
I know this is real…

My eyes turned over and my body started to shiver.
I am screaming out all the air in my lungs.
I feel a pressure all along my bones.
Contractions are making me spit my blood out.
Something’s got inside of me…


My room is goddamn cold,
The sweat just makes it worse.
I see books and items on the floor,
But I don’t remember touching them…
And when I went in the bathroom,
It’s not my face I saw in the mirror!
Why am I full of scars?
Who’s this blank face staring at me?

Now I see them wherever I’m trying to hide.
Time stops every time they’re walking near by.
They come every time I’m alone in the street.
Sometimes I don’t remember what I did the days before.
Something’s got inside of me…


I wish it didn’t end this way…
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Comments: 23

Keylimepie [2006-11-25 09:11:01 +0000 UTC]

this is really good! i love the elements of it! it makes me shiver just thinking bout it! hehe

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Burning-Sins In reply to Keylimepie [2006-11-25 10:13:11 +0000 UTC]

Cool means my effects are good lol
Thanks a lot

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Keylimepie In reply to Burning-Sins [2006-11-25 10:42:20 +0000 UTC]

anytime!!

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RedWombat [2006-10-27 01:30:36 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous. I love the way the stanzas move, each to its own, but still of a bigger whole. So many poems and yet it seems rarely does one strike so quickly my attentions

'I won’t try to sleep again,
Because I know they’re coming back.
I just heard the door slam,
And I feel a presence close to me.
Although there’s nobody here,
What are these whispers in my ear?
They know how to excite my fear,
I know this is real…'

was captivating, expecially the last line, 'I know this is real...' So many nights do I stare upon my countenance, not through any mirror, but self-thought. And sometimes, it seems as if I've lived a day not truely my own.

Wonderful. Very moving.

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Burning-Sins In reply to RedWombat [2006-10-27 08:50:20 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you very much!

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RedWombat In reply to Burning-Sins [2006-10-27 17:24:23 +0000 UTC]

Welcome. ^_^

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Ruraa-Chann [2006-02-11 16:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Again the same... you're a god to write poems, like if u were feeling what you write and like if u already know how to continue writting, it's beautiful

and hei, AGREED your way of playing with wordsa in poems, the meanings,..

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Burning-Sins In reply to Ruraa-Chann [2006-02-11 18:06:26 +0000 UTC]

Those comments are really the best thing that I earn from my poetry
Thank you

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Ruraa-Chann In reply to Burning-Sins [2006-02-11 18:18:50 +0000 UTC]

Really? Wow thanks

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tenderchick [2006-01-29 14:32:24 +0000 UTC]

J'aime beaucoup...

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Burning-Sins In reply to tenderchick [2006-01-29 18:07:19 +0000 UTC]

Ca me fait plaisir que ca te plaise

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dubby09 [2006-01-12 20:48:39 +0000 UTC]

very intriguing..

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Burning-Sins In reply to dubby09 [2006-01-13 06:41:42 +0000 UTC]

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ErdeT [2006-01-09 03:21:25 +0000 UTC]

So very good dear Wondefully formatted as well

thrilling.

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Burning-Sins In reply to ErdeT [2006-01-09 13:17:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you dear, comment apreciate

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ErdeT In reply to Burning-Sins [2006-01-09 20:45:47 +0000 UTC]

Don't thank.

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xxAngelxKissesxx [2006-01-05 11:01:50 +0000 UTC]

This is good! Keep it up!

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FallinFromTheStars [2006-01-03 20:21:35 +0000 UTC]

Oooh freakily good!

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Burning-Sins In reply to FallinFromTheStars [2006-01-04 07:33:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I enjoyed wirtting it

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LynxArc [2006-01-03 12:26:20 +0000 UTC]

oooh *brrr*

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Burning-Sins In reply to LynxArc [2006-01-03 14:33:10 +0000 UTC]

N'est pas peur je suis la

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MovE1 [2006-01-03 11:47:54 +0000 UTC]

/cool, j"'aime bien la répétition 'something's got inside of me' c mieux convaincant . Joli texte avec une jolie atmoshpere (suis pas expert en littérature mais le texte est bien posé et inquiétant )

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Burning-Sins In reply to MovE1 [2006-01-03 14:32:18 +0000 UTC]

Ca me fait plaisir que tu dises ca parce que je me disais ''c'est pas une oeuvre litteraire mais j'espere au moin que je saurais mettre l'ambiance'', merci bcp

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