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Keylimepie [2006-11-25 09:11:01 +0000 UTC]
this is really good! i love the elements of it! it makes me shiver just thinking bout it! hehe
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Burning-Sins In reply to Keylimepie [2006-11-25 10:13:11 +0000 UTC]
Cool means my effects are good lol
Thanks a lot
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RedWombat [2006-10-27 01:30:36 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous. I love the way the stanzas move, each to its own, but still of a bigger whole. So many poems and yet it seems rarely does one strike so quickly my attentions
'I won’t try to sleep again,
Because I know they’re coming back.
I just heard the door slam,
And I feel a presence close to me.
Although there’s nobody here,
What are these whispers in my ear?
They know how to excite my fear,
I know this is real…'
was captivating, expecially the last line, 'I know this is real...' So many nights do I stare upon my countenance, not through any mirror, but self-thought. And sometimes, it seems as if I've lived a day not truely my own.
Wonderful. Very moving.
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tenderchick [2006-01-29 14:32:24 +0000 UTC]
J'aime beaucoup...
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xxAngelxKissesxx [2006-01-05 11:01:50 +0000 UTC]
This is good! Keep it up!
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LynxArc [2006-01-03 12:26:20 +0000 UTC]
oooh *brrr*
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