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C-Ungol — Wise Trees
Published: 2007-01-10 01:32:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description I walked under the trees
With their long leaves
In the forest of long ago
And when I drew near
I could hear
Them speak in voices low

Of creatures they knew
And things that once grew
And lived in the woods of their past
They said with a sigh
Why did it all die?
Why doesn’t beauty last?

I walked up to a tree
And said to he
Tell me for you are wise
Why speak of past things?
When each day brings
Something new to your eyes?

Well friend he said
And shook his head
We are afraid to forget
Though others are gone
We live on
We have our tales to tell yet

So under night’s veil
They told me their tales
Their stories, their poems, their songs,
I listened with awe
For I now saw
That they had been right all along

I no longer walk under the trees
With their long leaves
In the forest of long ago
For I’m now the past you see
Now they talk of me
In their voices low
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Comments: 16

dragonstar10 [2007-06-04 06:25:49 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!

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PoisonedAcid [2007-02-11 12:31:37 +0000 UTC]

The structure and rhyme scheme are really cool. Plus, being and LOTR obsessive myself, how could I NOT love this poem. Excellent work

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C-Ungol In reply to PoisonedAcid [2007-02-11 13:57:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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PoisonedAcid In reply to C-Ungol [2007-02-12 03:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Any time!

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singe723 [2007-01-27 21:12:13 +0000 UTC]

whats ents?

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C-Ungol In reply to singe723 [2007-01-27 21:42:43 +0000 UTC]

giant talking trees in the two towers....

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singe723 [2007-01-27 06:05:53 +0000 UTC]

i really really like that in the beggining i thought it had to do with avatar and the one episode where they go to the forrest that was burned down by the fire nation and ang is really really sad but katara shows him the acorn and then ang shows the acorn to the spirit

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C-Ungol In reply to singe723 [2007-01-27 19:49:42 +0000 UTC]

that's a good episode...but no, i actually sort of based it off Ents.

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Vampiric-Apricot [2007-01-10 23:45:10 +0000 UTC]

Nice Poem i really like it

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C-Ungol In reply to Vampiric-Apricot [2007-01-11 01:33:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks, i think i showed it to you and nicole last year but i've changed it a little since then.

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Vampiric-Apricot In reply to C-Ungol [2007-01-11 12:51:59 +0000 UTC]

really cause i thought it sounded familiar!

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wolfgoddess-kami [2007-01-10 01:54:19 +0000 UTC]

the rhymes are so kewl!

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C-Ungol In reply to wolfgoddess-kami [2007-01-10 20:13:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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flowerpower09 [2007-01-10 01:36:23 +0000 UTC]

thats is VERY VERY good haha!! it makes you think and i like poems like that!! great job!

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C-Ungol In reply to flowerpower09 [2007-01-11 01:37:26 +0000 UTC]

ummm, thank you i think.

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flowerpower09 In reply to C-Ungol [2007-01-11 02:02:34 +0000 UTC]

^^ no problem!!

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