C3POwn In reply to hardcore-introvert [2011-05-14 21:33:58 +0000 UTC]

theh, thanks, you know, the situation isn't completely a dream, do you know borderline syndrome ?
people that have it sometimes like go outside their bodies and look at themselves like they were watching a movie, a friend of mine has this syndrome and it's also her that chose the words for this story.

alrighty, tell me, wich ones of th "..." should i remove, cause in my eyes they seem fitting but i'll try to put it the way you think it'll be better and see wich i like best ^^

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hardcore-introvert In reply to C3POwn [2011-05-14 21:49:27 +0000 UTC]

No, I've never heard of it, but from your description it reminds me of OBEs (out of body experiences) They sound a lot like that, only they can happen to anyone, and it's rarely more than once. Has she ever told you what it's like? It sounds so interesting.

If you like them, then leave them. After all, different writers have different tastes . They certainly helped create the atmosphere of the story. I'm not sure how to put this...it felt sort of like, after that last sentence, my mind stumbled over the extra two periods. If that makes any sense at all

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C3POwn In reply to hardcore-introvert [2011-05-14 21:53:47 +0000 UTC]

she said that it's like she does things she actually doesn't want to do, like being nice to someone she knows but doesn't like anymore, she says it's like your body goes on autopilot but your mind is still working, or something like that, she couldn't realy explain it too well, what i find kinda funny is that you think of those experiences as interesting, just like i did, when she told me she had those i immediatly asked her what they were like ^^

i think i'll leave them, the ones after the last sentence indicate that after that sentance all he could bring out was silence, that after that sentence it's over for him, or something like that, it sounds and looks more logical in my mind though

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hardcore-introvert In reply to C3POwn [2011-05-15 19:17:22 +0000 UTC]

Hey, that is pretty cool that we had the same reaction !

Sounds good .

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C3POwn In reply to hardcore-introvert [2011-05-15 19:28:01 +0000 UTC]

yea it is, you know, i've noticed that pretty much every single person i meet here on deviant art is kinda like me in a way ^^

yea, hey, by any chance do you know 2 words that you think would make an interesting story in my mind, i'm kinda making it my thing that i let other people start my thought process

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hardcore-introvert In reply to C3POwn [2011-05-15 19:49:37 +0000 UTC]

Well, we're all artists

I think I do. Should I send them to you in a note, or can I just say them here?

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C3POwn In reply to hardcore-introvert [2011-05-15 20:20:51 +0000 UTC]

yup, that's what i love about deviant art ^^
except the people that can't take constructive comments, i wrote one on this fan picture of an anime character from Bleach, i said that he/she had good drawing skillz but that his picture didn't look anything like the original character, which in my eyes it didn't, he / she starts calling me dumb cause he/she says that it's "too difficult" for me to understand that it's in his/her own "style" -_-

do it in a note, wouldn't wanne spoil it

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hardcore-introvert In reply to C3POwn [2011-05-17 00:46:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it's too bad that some people are so defensive about their art. But lots are very open to constructive criticism, too

'kay Oh, and thanks for the watch, by the way

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C3POwn In reply to hardcore-introvert [2011-05-17 13:30:04 +0000 UTC]

yup, like me, if someone tells me something could be better if i'd do it in a certain way, i'll try it and see if i like it better myself ^^

you're welcome

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C3POwn In reply to LikeShamandalie [2011-05-13 18:50:21 +0000 UTC]

thanks, it's nice to know that you did

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