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C3POwn — horror, or not ... [NSFW]
Published: 2011-04-24 15:09:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 325; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description A man walks through a dark alley, twilight has filled the air,
out of the corner of his eye he sees a shadow,
rapidly coming closer, getting bigger and taking shape,
the man runs, in fear of his life,
he clings to his briefcase and runs like death himself was chasing him...

When he reached the end of the alley,
he looked behind seeing that the shadow had caught up to him,
it's hands coming closer and closer to his face,
the man, petrified in fear, opened his briefcase,
took out his gun wich he held with him for emergencies
and shot a bullet straight into the shadows face...

Only to realise,
it was his wife,
trying to tell him he had forgotten his lunch...
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Comments: 20

ainettu [2011-06-27 03:48:34 +0000 UTC]

Lol just was his wife XD
wow you are a good writer!
Nice atmosphere ..creepy..but it'ssoo good to the history and good ending XD

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C3POwn In reply to ainettu [2011-06-27 23:09:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^

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ainettu In reply to C3POwn [2011-06-29 21:28:20 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome c:

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XSapphire-RainX [2011-06-09 13:55:16 +0000 UTC]

O_O

asadfds
THE WIFE SHOULD HAVE LIKE
YELLED HIS NAME
AND TOLD HIM HE FORGOT HIS LUNCH
She probably wouldn't have gotten shot ._.

>_<

Great story.

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C3POwn In reply to XSapphire-RainX [2011-06-09 14:08:58 +0000 UTC]

thanks and thanks for all the favs and the watch ^^

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XSapphire-RainX In reply to C3POwn [2011-06-09 23:44:37 +0000 UTC]

NP C:

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chris-illustrator [2011-05-16 03:19:31 +0000 UTC]

Nice creepy atmosphere and I like the twist ending.

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C3POwn In reply to chris-illustrator [2011-05-16 08:39:47 +0000 UTC]

yup, that's what i was going for ^^

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seishin-o-honoo [2011-05-11 22:20:48 +0000 UTC]

ummm im not shure to laugh or cry... funny but sad... I LIKE IT!!!

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C3POwn In reply to seishin-o-honoo [2011-05-12 18:29:23 +0000 UTC]

well, it's not realy supposed to be funny, more ironic, i geuss you could say it's "humor" but not intented to make people laugh, more like to make people stop and think for a moment

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seishin-o-honoo In reply to C3POwn [2011-05-16 19:54:38 +0000 UTC]

i get ya...i like dark humor so it fits in my "funny" definition. did make me think though

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C3POwn In reply to seishin-o-honoo [2011-05-16 19:56:11 +0000 UTC]

i can understand that
good, then the story did it's job ^^

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Convergenceonly [2011-05-11 15:27:27 +0000 UTC]

could be a great setup for a murder scenario.

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C3POwn In reply to Convergenceonly [2011-05-11 15:30:27 +0000 UTC]

hmmm, probably, if the man hides the body of his wife and is then found by the police, then the police could do a whole investigation etc.

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Convergenceonly In reply to C3POwn [2011-05-11 15:34:27 +0000 UTC]

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TheNewb911 [2011-05-10 01:32:18 +0000 UTC]

LOOOL, made my day, i was actually kinda spooked myself .. o.o
*is listening to scary dubstep*
yea, scary ... o.o

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C3POwn In reply to TheNewb911 [2011-05-10 14:31:55 +0000 UTC]

personnaly, i don't find it that scary, more ironic then scary, but i'm realy glad you liked it, please tell me if i have to write more things like this

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TheNewb911 In reply to C3POwn [2011-05-10 23:04:32 +0000 UTC]

haha no worries,
you should write something like, really scary, and something silley at the end ...
or not

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HowlsInTheDistance [2011-05-10 00:33:07 +0000 UTC]

EPIC FAIL (the man, not the poem lol.)

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C3POwn In reply to HowlsInTheDistance [2011-05-10 14:31:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks for pointing that one out ^^

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