ArcticJackal [2018-10-08 23:46:52 +0000 UTC]
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First off let me start of saying, dang have you improved!!! About a year ago your experimentation with fire was "a bear's a bear" [link here www.deviantart.com/cactix/art/… with waves and curves for fire, as if it were colored wind,,, in this the fire flows with the wind but has a more natural look and ashes everywhere and not just glowey wind. Personally I don't think I could ever pull this good of a palette and view and even with the fire, I would just color, glow, and called it a day!!! Now with the wolf himself (or whichever canine he is, looking at how canidid he looks) the fur looks more like its wet than burning, nor is he symmetrical (looking at the snout you can see what I mean) and muscles in his arms look more like scars, though I love your technique!!!~ the bandage looks amazing, especially the burnt part, but maybe where its bent try putting more shading to indicate hoe thick it is, since I assume the material is thick. Last but not least the tears, I love how they show expression, although you say the tears evaporate, say it in the picture, that last, or last few tears turning to smoke, giving you the feel of fire, what it looks, the smell, the sound of crackling and scream, try to put it in one piece!
Overall I'd rate it a solid 10, most professional artists you see is just one step closer to your level!
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cactix In reply to ArcticJackal [2018-10-09 00:19:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the critique! I really appreciate it. I've always struggled with expression so I'm glad you feel it in this instance!!!
I did notice the comment on "a bears a bear" deviation which you may have misunderstood a bit, its not actually fire in him, but a fire essence, so the wispy way it is in that piece is how its supposed to be ;v;'' But I'm glad you see improvement with it!!
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