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Eu espero ver uma continuação deste desenho, porque algo me diz que o simbionte vai querer Mary Jane como sua nova hospedeira para assim tentar voltar para Peter Parker.
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Infelizmente não haverÑ a continuação, pois o cliente decidiu parar por aqui...
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Anyone want to hire this fine fellow to complete it?Β
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Yes please do the 5th page of this awesome work !!
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I would be very happy!!!!
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I commissioned these... and stopped when they were listed on Ebay after I specifically asked them to not do so. This is my script, not Caio's.
If I recall they were 100$ for the inked images. You *don't* get the originals and they *will* be sold on Ebay, so yeah bear that in mind.
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I'm sorry my friend but I never said the script was mine.
and would not be able to create such a cool story, in my comments I always mentioned that it was a request from a client, a commission
put in the post (commission)
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Yikes...
What was the finale?
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The next page (5) the alien would've started joining with her, only for the police to shine their lights on her and "interrupt" what was happening. She'd then leap away now empowered by the suit but only 25-30% covered by it's material. Page 6 had her leaping around in darkness (so we wouldn't see details of how far the suit was along with covering her but we'd be able to tell it was progressing as she made her way out of the park). Page 7 was a reveal panel with her fully Venomized atop a roof (or was it inside an alley? I forget).
From there she was going to demand the alien leave her, but then get caught up in using it's powers to try and stop a robbery but fail (with the old lady dying as a result of the robbery) -- and then feel obligated to try and chase down the culprit (similar to Spidey's origins with Uncle Ben). It'd culminate with her accepting the suit on a full time basis (so she'd keep it out of trouble AND so it'd help her with her modeling/acting career which she had in this universe). The ending would be her morphing in front of Peter trying to explain, and the story leaving it to the reader to decide what he'd say about her wearing the suit.
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Unfortunately no, the customer stopped on page 4, I still got the script on page 5 but he decided to stop.
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The only reason I stopped was because the pages were listed on Ebay after I specifically asked for that not to happen. I would've purchased them down the road and did not want to get into a bidding war on Ebay for stuff I already paid for + plotted.
In the end instead of having 20+ pages of this stuff produced, (and I would've had that much done regardless of the wait times as I don't mind spending $ to see these things realized), you only got the 4 + the money from the Ebay listing. So you lost out on the $, and us fans lost out on seeing these finished.
It is what it is.
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Sorry, but what happened that my agent asked if you wanted to the originals from the beginning of the work and you said no, only the digital archive, as the comic originals are from the artists and you didn't say you wanted to buy them I made available to selling on eBay.
This is not about money my friend, you paid for the files and I did, I sent you all, if you from the beginning had shown interest in the originals I would have sold them without a problem, I just can't have stacks of originals being I have a market for them.
Whenever I start a commissions page project my agent asks if the client wants the originals or just the digital file.
as I see it, I did nothing wrong, and you paid for the files in high quality and that's what I did, I sent them all.
Sorry for any inconvenience, but I see nothing wrong with our trading.
the best 
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Nobody explained that the originals would be sold on Ebay. Had I known that, I would've made a deal to buy them.
Not an inconvenience to me in the end, but you did lose out on more work + money that I would've kept providing. This story would've gone at least 15-20 pages worth.
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spectacular lines in every way. i feel the stress she is under and i love the use of negative space to enhance her pressence
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I am still studying the use of sequential narrative a lot, but if I have been able to pass on these feelings I already know that I am on the right track. thank you very much for the comment
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