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Published: 2017-11-10 04:39:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 442; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Here she is, the badass Hispanic Panic herself!For Hope you like it! /w\
AWAWAWAWAH!!! A SPEEDPAINT!!!
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Comments: 6
This piece is very well done. The shading is amazing, the lineart is amazing, but there are a few things I would suggest.
• 1.
The placements and angles.
The muzzle is a big factor here. The way the jaw curves towards it and the angle the muzzle is drawn, they don't exactly line up, it makes it look slightly weird, but is the only 'major' issue in this category. Another thing, the other side of the face, the part that is slightly hidden by the muzzle, doesn't curve as much and seems a little more flat than it should be. It doesn't have the shape a pone's would. Also, the neck seems a little more thick than the head could rest on, it would outweigh it and it overall wouldn't be very comfortable looking. I see what you were going for though and the angles don't look too bad. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
• 2.
Impact and color choices.
Alright, I can tell this might have been a struggle? The background color choices look like they were suppose to go with the character's emotion, which from what I can tell seems to be less than happy and darker, hence the colors. But with a brighter colored character, it doesn't blend well, it sets it off and gives this weird vibe that doesn't set well. The colors contrast a little too much. But it looks better than other choices I've seen! It doesn't look half bad.
• 3.
Details. Ah yes, you were regretting this weren't you?
Yea, yea. I get it, details are a pain the the rear. Trust me. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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