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AcousticSodaPop [2017-11-18 15:11:10 +0000 UTC]

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Stunning! That's the first word that comes to my mind. This is gorgeous.

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• 1.
Angles of the add ons.

I feel like the horns are laid back too far, while there are some pones( and other species ) who have horns laid back like that, the way they have so little room on the head from this angle makes them seem much thinner than they are. They also seem to go down the forehead quite far. Make them rise sooner( near the starting of where they attach to the head- )more and place them back farther.


• 2.
Dimensions and details of accessories.

The ribbons. They looked lovely at first, but then I noticed the extra extensions. Comparing them to the one wrapped around the tail( which I assume it's all connected together as one- ) is much thicker and wider than it should be. Also, if the ribbon were to be 'tattered' or 'torn', it would not have such fine line holes, there would be little grooves and small thin rips on the outer parts most likely. Also, add little lines near the edge or in the center to show that it's a fabric. Look up tutorials, that's what I usually do, and try and give it that detail.


• 3.
Colors.

( From their POV. ) The left shoulder area-? Is very colorful compared to everything else. Try making sure all the colors look similar before you finish the drawing. I have trouble doing that sometimes too.


Other than that, everything else is very well done! I really love your shading, and the anatomy is on point. I really do love it!

-^p^

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