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Published: 2015-07-26 04:01:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 668; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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I also thought of calling it "Color the Way I Feel" or "My Bleeding Colors"; but with my sister's part now done the current title is the perfect fit to go along with the contest theme by . This is a very powerful group with a great big heart. Please stop in for a while, you will be greatly moved.This contest is similar in a way to the contest the group I'm a admin in did a short time back with a team up of artist and writer depicting a theme together.
My sister is the my awesome writer teammate in this contest .
Once she has written her part to go with this it will be posted to the contest and we are crossing our fingers for the win.
Update July 26: My sister's wonderful poem is now done Sinking .
If you haven't notice by now most of my works use bold colors; and with them I tried to depict how others can cause negative emotions in each scene.
The lack of others can cause just as strong emotions in someone also.
This is a bit dark, but I hope when you see it you will reflect on how you can drive away these negative feeling in others.
Sometimes the best way to do that is just by being there for them. SO HUG SOMEBODY TODAY!
Im excited to see what you write sis!
Artwork by
Used brushes by and .
Also used many photo references that I found doubles and triples of the same ones out of Photostock, Shutterstock and other different royalty free photo stock sights.
Work done in SketchBookPro and PSE8.
i would love to hear comments for everyone one this work. I think we all can benefit from the discussion.
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Comments: 8
This one, is beautiful. I love the concept you've integrated here <3
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Thank you. I love these kinds of challenges and contest.
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I like the name but I think we will have to change it so that it will work with the piece I wrote
Sinking
I'm walking the street with dread,
Tears streaming as they mock.
No, I can't get out of bed,
This room is closing in.
"Look at me", I protest; silent,
Your concern for me; lies.
Alone, no one cares; I tread,
Waters so deep and dark.
These feelings won't go away,
Crushing my chest with pain.
No, this is not a cliche,
I am dying inside.
The air around me, so thick,
My lungs struggle to breath.
I am sinking like a brick,
Will no one come save me?
Anita/Amarantheans I used your photo as the preview image so just click on the picture in this comment
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Got it! Thanks sis! It's a very powerful poem. Loves you!
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Thanks... I missed the rhyme in the third stanza aaak! But it is still good right?
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I like it. But if you think it needs changed you could ask them if okay before judging starts.
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Nah... I really like the way it flows word wise and it is in proper iambic pentameter
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