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And Vegeta saves the day!!! (applause) Dialogue Colors
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"This junk barely counts as training." or "This junk can barely be used for training." In the original, 'can' and 'barely' are backwards, and the this/that comparison is similar to what I mentioned with Bulma a few pages back, 'this' tends to connect more to something Vegeta himself is interacting with. My initial correction, in addition to incorporating the technical errors, is for flow.
Also, BEEEWWWM @_@ (I'll get to the other pages I swear ahahhaha T.T)
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ahahahaah no problem, sweetie!!
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Vegeta es el mejor , esta lanzado un ataque a la vez q crea una especie de campo protector atrás por su familia
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Yes Yes! he protected Bulma and Goku's family. Aaand he destroyed the ship!
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hehehe he's a hero now!! yay!
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