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KiKi-the-Angel [2012-01-31 01:28:46 +0000 UTC]

i know! Kuwa-kun! soooo brave!

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PreMaturePoet [2011-08-13 09:22:35 +0000 UTC]

Kuwabara was always my second favorite!

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WhiteCourtain [2011-07-14 14:54:50 +0000 UTC]

Aww...you gotta love him T_T

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HieiSetsunaShika [2011-07-12 01:12:37 +0000 UTC]

DAW! Kuwabara is being so noble! In most fanfics I've read, people either go out of their way to ignore him or make a fool of him, but you show his real character and give him good scenes! Awesome job!

Your english is getting a lot better too, though there were two tiny errors:
"Kuwabara, what we're gonna do now?" should be "Kuwabara, what are we gonna do now?"
and "promess" is actually spelt "promise"

Other than that you're doing a great job! I really loved the line "Alone, with three girls and a hard decision"

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xPorcelain-Lolitax [2011-07-07 22:08:39 +0000 UTC]

;_; i love Kuwabara, I just wanna huggle him right now

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Shinamegame99907 [2011-07-05 21:29:03 +0000 UTC]

go kuwa you can do it i beleve in you

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GanguroGurl [2011-07-05 18:45:13 +0000 UTC]

Yay! I'm glad the girls get a few panels of the story!

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Angel-Rowena [2011-07-05 12:54:38 +0000 UTC]

Hiei disapeared?! T^T *curls up in corner*

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missjo88 [2011-07-05 05:05:18 +0000 UTC]

Love it

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Kitsune-Kiara [2011-07-05 04:41:19 +0000 UTC]

So sad ;__;
Where is yusuke?
great work!<3

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Unoko412 [2011-07-05 00:57:46 +0000 UTC]

can't wait for the next one! XuX

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Fluff-Kitten [2011-07-04 21:30:16 +0000 UTC]

Good English, better art.

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