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archsage12 [2012-12-31 22:41:29 +0000 UTC]
There has been a span of over 2 years from the most recent comment and the second most recent! Anyhoo, I really love your work, it looks so nice <3 One thing, though; The nose seems kind of small and nostril-less. Otherwise, the colours work well together and I love your character design. I'm Chinese, so... Zhao actually means early, not Xiao, BUT the name sounds just like a regular Chinese name would, so props to you. Wonderful work, nice watercolour effect, it looks really pretty
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HikaruNephele [2010-07-28 14:00:07 +0000 UTC]
Aww, he looks so friendly! I think the water color effect came across very well. ^_^
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EphemeralWinter [2010-07-20 21:05:40 +0000 UTC]
Now this is much more "semi-realistic." Unfortunately, I have similar critiques. 8D;
Now, the face shape depends on the character, but I would say that thinning it out a bit would help the image balance. The spacing on the eyes is fine, but the tiny nose makes them seem far-spaced. The neck should thicken near the head. I would add smaller strands of hair here and there, but that is completely up to your taste.
The hand is the most glaring flaw here (though it's honestly not as bad as when we started out, eh?). At this point, it is merely the outline of a hand; I would add definition in the segments of each finger as well as the folds and mounds on the hand.
Overall, the colors are very harmonious and look lovely together. Besides these points, you seem to be improving at a great pace. Keep it up!
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Calvariae In reply to EphemeralWinter [2010-07-20 21:43:31 +0000 UTC]
Similar critiques mean similar things I should improve on! : D
Is there any rule of thumb I can use to gauge the thickness a nose should be? :3
Oh god, the hand! Even when I was drawing this, I noticed that was a great fault. I find the fingers are too thin, and lack flesh. More practice is needed~
Thanks : D! I hope I continue to improve ^^!
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ARTabstraction [2010-07-15 00:00:14 +0000 UTC]
O.O
That's so pretty!!!!
*_*
It definitely looks like it's done with watercolors, and it's just gorgeous!!!
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AcedicMelody [2010-07-14 18:15:09 +0000 UTC]
The color looks good! IT does have kind of a water color effect and you're doing good at semi-realism. Practice on the nose though. Oh and btw, I don't think it was Xiao that's early morning, but Zao (well that just means early).
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Calvariae In reply to AcedicMelody [2010-07-14 18:47:13 +0000 UTC]
I wasn't really attempt semi-realism is this one. XD -shrug- I googled it
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Cassyopheya [2010-07-14 17:12:20 +0000 UTC]
woooow *-*
sweet <33
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