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calvin-genereux In reply to DylanIgnace [2009-05-15 21:23:22 +0000 UTC]
Then I propose a write off. 5 pages of fiction. Ill use the prologue for Alpha Squad and you use whatever you want. Whoever has the best grammer, diction, and sentence structure will win. Ophiguris will be the judge
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calvin-genereux In reply to Ophiguris [2009-05-15 20:46:17 +0000 UTC]
Hell ya! My grammer, sentence structure, and diction are way better than his!
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Ophiguris In reply to calvin-genereux [2009-05-15 23:52:35 +0000 UTC]
First of all, WTF is a diction : |?
SECOND OFF, your grammar is T E R R I B L E u_u
Better than most people, I'll give you that, but "Take A pawS"
Calvy, singular and plural, just, no D👍: 0 ⏩: 1
calvin-genereux In reply to Ophiguris [2009-05-16 01:29:45 +0000 UTC]
1) My grammer is good, I used paws because if I were to say taking a paw it would sound stupider.
2) diction is the level of words you use in your writing (I say mundane which is a better word than normal etc.)
3) I GOT MY TABLET!!!!!!!!!!
YAY!!!!!!!
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