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Published: 2005-09-09 16:49:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 188; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 13
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Description ... Glass Heart
Roaming fingers heightened for sharpness of ice
Kaleidoscopic dreams jittery beyond the farer sight
Hampering the feeling for knowing its lustre
Shines deeper into a single shade of skin    
Common thoughts meet common dreams
Peeling myths of eclectic ethnicity
Taking jest in careful sincerity
In a see-through world of love
Forbidden
~
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Comments: 9

Charmology [2005-09-13 07:47:12 +0000 UTC]

Your vocab is, as always, admirably wide of range. I always like to read your work for the vocab, even if I don't understand it sometimes.

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Innerserendipity [2005-09-10 12:40:49 +0000 UTC]

Such a beautiful poem!

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calypso-crescent In reply to Innerserendipity [2005-09-11 12:23:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm very glad u enjoyed this

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Meow360 [2005-09-10 00:19:10 +0000 UTC]

wow... those words are so... *flips dictionary*... lol!

well used tho! i have to admit... well used words however, using so much big words tend to get tedious my friend... perhaps lengthen ur poems so it would bring a better and clearer picture.

But brief short moment of picturing the poem, u have made it better than many poets i know... I hope u even understand what im saying... LOL!

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calypso-crescent In reply to Meow360 [2005-09-11 12:21:43 +0000 UTC]

Bagus ah.. at least your dictionary's not collecting dust

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Meow360 In reply to calypso-crescent [2005-09-11 23:48:48 +0000 UTC]

it WAS! but thanks to u my dictionary is saved!!!

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phoenixmentality [2005-09-09 17:43:25 +0000 UTC]

Such elegence in words amazing

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calypso-crescent In reply to phoenixmentality [2005-09-11 12:17:24 +0000 UTC]

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phoenixmentality In reply to calypso-crescent [2005-09-11 15:27:21 +0000 UTC]

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