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Speedpaint - youtu.be/2vwexcGdHCEKatelyn Belongs to Aphmau
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Ooh! Katelyn is obviously annoyed about something! I like how simple Katelyn and the background looks! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Here is a list of things you can improve on:
- I think the line art should have been cleaner. I suggest cleaning it very carefully with an eraser tool and make some parts of the line art be sharp at the tip for the tips of the hair and clothing.
- Maybe you should include more complex shading next time. There are some shading but the whole still looks flat. Tutorial: tamberella.deviantart.com/art/…
Overall, I think you did a great job on this. You just need to work on the lineart and shading. ^_^
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I think this is super cute! You clearly put in a lot of work in this and it turned out cute. I like you colors, nd how nothing sticks out horribly. The background I actually like, and is kind of like tall grass, like from Pokemon. It is kind of clashing with your chibi style, though and if she is standing on it, it looks like she is standing on the tip of the grass and I'm a fan of this, though I am confused by some aspects of your drawing. The hair is off colored to Katlyn's blue hair, and from first glance, I mistook her for Michi. Another just slightly confusing thing is she doesn't have legs. Is she a ghost? I can't really tell. I though I do like this piece it also shows you don't know much about perspective and if you do, you didn't show it if this piece. I do really like this drawing, but you missed very important aspects, that you could easily fix if you get rid of the background. I have nothing to say about line art, though because I am generally a fan of how you did yours, and I'd wouldn't have room to talk because mines sucks. Once again, alovely peice by a lovely artist
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Thank you for your Input on this, But I will clear some things up. I made this to base it in another World, Where Katelyn is A Warrior-Princess Meifwa, Where fighting Mid-Battle, Dies trying to save Jeffrey. Hence, the 'No Legs' Part. 2nd, I know that Katelyn's hair is off, I was not going off reference making it hard to find a good color that still stands out. And finally, I would never notice these aspects you peck of since I am a Very-Young artist, And I typically don't know these things. If someone were to tell me before I made this Piece, I believe I could have done Better. Yes, Its good but It can be Better, Even I believe that.
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Alright, I see. Well I still like it.
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Ahh! I love your art so much! You always impress me <3
I really like the position ;3
Lets get straight into the critique:
There is loads of detail but you cant really see it that well so I suggest you make them darker / lighter.
The hair is very straight - the black outline, which if you stay on the logical side you could add some extra parts and more unequal.
We all know Katelyn has hair covering a part of her eye but I suggest you do the bit under the hair as it looks like Katelyn only has one eye.
It looks like you have done a ghost as there is no legs but I suggest it slowly fades to give that effect.
Please do not take offence, I really love your art.
Have a good day, reader / artist!
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Thank you for your Opinion on this and Output, I appreciate Your Tips and Tricks! I take No offence to this, But if you don't mind me Explaining some things then keep on reading. 1st, It never came to me to make a fade effect, Though I was originally going for a sort of Slowly Dripping Effect, Not a Fade. 2nd, To me I did not see anymore room to put Katelyns other eye and the room that I could put it to make it look Identical, the Bottom Line would blend with the Hair Line. And 3rd, In my Sketch Draft, I have some hair Sticking out of her, well, head and hair.
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Asdfgh no one draws her as a meif'wa anymore-
but aaaa she's so cute in your style I can't--
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