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CandlelitxTragedy — Break The Skin
Published: 2007-04-09 22:19:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 234; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description Oh what lies beyond this shell,
Seems so beautiful and sweet!
Think of all the stars and roses,
The fantasies I could meet!
I struggle hard to break away,
From this wretch that binds my soul.
I'm mocked so evily for my troubles,
Making taunters gain control.
Oh sweet red liquid that keeps me alive,
I pray, abandon this skin!
Flow with me into a new freedom,
Where I may live again.
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Comments: 6

self-destruct-101 [2007-06-25 00:17:57 +0000 UTC]

cool.
can't say I like the idea behind it, but the concept is nice.

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darkestwon [2007-04-10 03:27:59 +0000 UTC]

I really like the flow of this poem, even though it was written quickly!
Simple but well done!

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CandlelitxTragedy In reply to darkestwon [2007-04-10 22:23:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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darkestwon In reply to CandlelitxTragedy [2007-04-11 00:08:40 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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ChaoticArtist87 [2007-04-09 22:54:03 +0000 UTC]

i like it

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CandlelitxTragedy In reply to ChaoticArtist87 [2007-04-10 22:23:34 +0000 UTC]

thankies. ^_^

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