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Page 5. If anyone cares, this is kind of chapter 1 introducing the main guys.
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JadeStone717 [2009-02-26 07:07:28 +0000 UTC]

omg Im so glad I found this. THIS IS SO COOL
MORE MORE MORE RAH RAH RAH

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ViroVeteruscy [2009-01-09 20:57:37 +0000 UTC]

Lol, nice very funny ^^

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Orangeofdoom [2008-12-04 04:20:05 +0000 UTC]

Its like when dumbledore tried to use that spell to counteract the avada cadavra curse and ended up changing his first kiss from some old chick to his best chum. The lesson is kids, PAUSE! Then act.

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TTSnim [2008-11-10 05:00:03 +0000 UTC]

He casts spells like I cast baking. XD

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MyrkSuki [2008-11-02 06:32:32 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations, you just learned Dragon Slave.

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ExemplarX3 [2008-10-31 17:45:39 +0000 UTC]

simply amazing, best mage guy eva I swear :3

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Capricornfox [2008-10-31 14:14:36 +0000 UTC]

lol love it.

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Kenichi2point0 [2008-10-31 05:30:08 +0000 UTC]

Lol! Somebody rolled a "1" one their spell casting!

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Devfrost2000 [2008-10-31 04:47:40 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha lol its really good. but the audience could use some background to the characters . . . . . . . are you planning to give more background info later in the story? its really good but can be confusing at times. the dialogue can be a little more wittier and less direct, given the genre of the comic. but other than that, its awesome!!!

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Candy-Janney In reply to Devfrost2000 [2008-11-06 16:35:33 +0000 UTC]

This is the beginning of the story. The characters get more introduced as the story progresses. I'm curious as to what confuses you about the dialog?

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Devfrost2000 In reply to Candy-Janney [2008-11-06 19:36:08 +0000 UTC]

well, it kinda doesnt fit with the genre: this is just my opinion, but it feels like the characters arent saying enough to compensate for the actions that they are doing, but i may be wrong. i'd have to look @ the full story 2 fully understand it all. but other than that its cool

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Candy-Janney In reply to Devfrost2000 [2008-11-06 20:48:30 +0000 UTC]

Well it's a comedy story for tehe most part. Think Slayers/Excel Saga kind of thing. They aren't saying enough? There's a lot of dialog there lol!

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Devfrost2000 In reply to Candy-Janney [2008-11-07 01:43:49 +0000 UTC]

yeah, i guess. id like 2 c more of it tho. so wens the next page due?

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KittyIceCrystal [2008-10-31 03:43:06 +0000 UTC]

Haha! I LOVE the expressions!

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BanditRingtail3 [2008-10-31 02:46:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that universe... so very picky about how you word your spells...

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Abadoss [2008-10-31 02:09:06 +0000 UTC]

It's like a mixture of sanskit and arabic. Nice!

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Aramis-Dagaz [2008-10-31 01:38:58 +0000 UTC]

That's hilarious! Gotta watch out for those archaic words that you mispronounce and die.

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ORANGE-DiNO [2008-10-31 00:54:07 +0000 UTC]

XDXD "wait, crap no! let me star over!" god i loled so hard XD

i LOVE the way you draw comics. srsly. your lines are so smoooottthhhh

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Ephiel [2008-10-31 00:50:43 +0000 UTC]

Could be like...the prologue?

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greenninja89 [2008-10-31 00:40:23 +0000 UTC]

dang. this is funny. i like it.

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