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candyswirlz β€” Jade Puget, critique

Published: 2006-06-08 14:04:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 571; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 10
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Description I'm asking for critique because lol this didn't turn out like the original picture looks. (If you don't listen to AFI you have probably at least seen the ad on dev. art, and it shows this picture) anyway. I still like it a bit. I still have to soften the shading and stuff. This was done in like an hour.. ok maybe I messed around the shading and use of multiple pencils for longer... but this was done with a variety of H and B pencils.
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Comments: 11

CleverFool [2007-04-26 04:40:12 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha! ::smiles:: I drew Jade as chibi, using this same picture! Woot! Two points!!!

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candyswirlz In reply to CleverFool [2007-04-26 15:40:11 +0000 UTC]

lol I like it, and the Davey chibi too!

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WingsOfBlack [2006-11-24 01:29:52 +0000 UTC]

it does look exactly like the Jadeness, to me anyway...

I love it. only thing I have to say it...I'm pretty sure his hair is longer than that, unless it varies from that picture to the others...maybe I'm just confused..but yeah.

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totcdxbassist [2006-07-07 11:52:17 +0000 UTC]

hey..larissa here...girl with curly hair at 30show june 28 :]
i love this..y one thing is maybe add mroe to shirt...but since this was added june 8..most likely you read other omments and did somethin

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jessmarie [2006-06-09 22:09:17 +0000 UTC]

I like the shading, and the edgy feel it has

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Bequadra [2006-06-09 11:22:38 +0000 UTC]

ItΒ΄s a great portrait I just think that you could improve the shirt **

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Silvre [2006-06-08 18:29:46 +0000 UTC]

WOW! Great job on the hair! I wish I could draw hair that well! Keep up the great work!

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snarfer [2006-06-08 14:59:30 +0000 UTC]

This is really excellent, sorry I can't offer any critique cos I havent seen the original pic. But overall it all looks really great

-Elise

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mci021 [2006-06-08 14:11:08 +0000 UTC]

This is a beautiful drawing. You really ought to display it better. If you have a program like Photoshop, you should crop out the sketchbook edge at the top of the page. It will give it a more finished, professional look and feel. On the drawing itself, your contrast is wonderful. I haven't seen the reference image, but I don't feel the need to either. This stands on its own as a finished, solid work. You did an excellent job. You just need to finish the presentation in a manner befitting the quality of the drawing.

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Akwamaryna [2006-06-08 14:07:44 +0000 UTC]

nice view.

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bloodyteardrop08 [2006-06-08 14:06:16 +0000 UTC]

Never seen this picture or heard AFI before. But I like this a lot. He's hott. lol

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