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HeavenHelena [2010-11-14 10:05:53 +0000 UTC]
EDIT: NEe toch niet als je er lang naar kijkt xD
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HeavenHelena [2010-11-14 10:05:41 +0000 UTC]
Had je die ... oh nevermind xD Ik zag de description al, en haar ogen lijken nog steeds open ... D:
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QTroubadour In reply to Canisography [2010-11-15 04:04:40 +0000 UTC]
Okay, here goes.
This whole paragraph is assuming you are even trying to do actual wolf proportions. If not, ignore this paragraph. I'm not an authority by any means on wolf anatomy, but I'll give my humble opinion in that area. I think the head may be a bit too much streamlined. Wolves actually have pretty big foreheads... usually. Actually, taking another look, I think it may be the eyes that give this impression. You did a fantastic job shaping them, but I think that they may be a bit too large for a realistic eye shape. If you want to continue this eye shape, I would suggest experimenting with making them a little less angled back. Yet when I look at it, it really is very appealing to the eye as it is, so I commend you on that. You can do a whole lot more than I can, that's for sure.
On doing scenery, however, I do know a thing or two. To give a more realistic grass effect, I would suggest making individual strokes, for the highlights if nothing else. It makes the grass more individualized and therefore more realistic. As it is it kinda gives a bit of an impression of a pop-up book. However, you did an amazing job with the colors, with several values layered on each other and a really good job! It looks kinda
Well done on the sky, by the way, I really like it!
Lastly, depth. As it is it looks like the world goes on for a little bit and then suddenly ends. Good ways to avoid this are to stop making the flowers as individualized and give everything in the background a more blurry, impressionistic look. Also lightening up the color in the distance helps with depth perception a lot. If this was meant to be a hill, then a good way to show that would be to simply add another hill or two further in the background.
Sorry if this was too harsh. You did a great job, and I really like this a LOT! Really, really appealing! Keep it up and I'm excited to see more art from you!
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MagicallyCapricious [2010-10-13 22:36:13 +0000 UTC]
I love that song so much. good job on this!
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Xylena [2010-10-06 16:20:20 +0000 UTC]
O jej! 8D
That's so sweet, Very nice colors ;3
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Xylena In reply to Canisography [2010-10-12 17:52:34 +0000 UTC]
No problem :3
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Canisography In reply to HeavenHelena [2010-10-06 15:35:04 +0000 UTC]
Lijntjes, wรกรกr? xD
Ik wil in ieder geval wel dat de ogen gesloten blijven. xD
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HeavenHelena In reply to Canisography [2010-10-08 18:22:32 +0000 UTC]
Nee kijk .. wacht ik leg het ooit nog wel eens uit xD
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TheIriDesci [2010-10-06 11:56:54 +0000 UTC]
Aw, that's cute. I love the wolf's expression.
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