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Starworksrly [2016-10-18 02:55:05 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, this looks great, but if I may, could I offer you some advice? :3
So the first thing I notice is that the eyes look a little too close. For most artwork(even anime) there is about enough space for you to draw an eye in between the two normal ones, and one on each outer side. (5 'eyes' across the space; though for anime this usually isn't the case) www.portrait-artist.org/face/s…
Another thing I noticed is that the lips seem a bit disproportionate, one being a lot bigger than the other one. While there is usually a bigger lip, most of the time there isn't that much of a difference.mikelandry.tumblr.com/post/108…
And the final thing I would do is make the area by the ears, hair, and jawline a bit smoother; the areas where the hair meet look a bit unnatural, and not the nicest thing visually.
But overall their is a wonderful piece! <33
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canttel In reply to Mythiril [2016-09-12 15:00:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
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