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bandnut5 [2012-09-10 21:43:28 +0000 UTC]
why must you write so well im re-reading all the chapters waiting for more.
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Delicatesilver [2011-08-21 12:54:23 +0000 UTC]
Oh, how cool! I especially liked the opening part! It was just like the show!
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CrazyLilBit [2011-08-16 16:21:05 +0000 UTC]
"I saved your life, rocks!" HAhaha that had me going. I love this story & I love how you have them dishing off Zuko & fogetting and being mad at him for no reason. I am so loving this story!
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artemisrox98 [2011-08-10 04:47:46 +0000 UTC]
I love you, Captain BA! I love how you wrote this, and how you still kept the original personalities. I normally don't read fanfiction (I hate it quite a bit) but yours is an exception! Keep rockin'!
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V-ChristsW3apon [2011-06-10 21:48:21 +0000 UTC]
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!! :3
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FullMoonflower96 [2011-06-03 18:52:58 +0000 UTC]
Book Four: Air and Stormbenders are my two favoritest stories. Fandomme finished stormbenders, so when will you work on Book Four: Air?
please please work on it! i beg uu!! its the greatest!
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Deviantbandito [2011-05-16 10:28:07 +0000 UTC]
Peace is harder than war sometimes. You know who your enemy is and who your allies are in times of war. During peace time, it is not so simple.
It is not too far off when we say that "Peace is an alternative continuation of war."
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ronnicuh [2011-04-14 02:13:27 +0000 UTC]
Holy cow, this is the best Avatar fanfiction I've read yet!
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ronnicuh [2011-04-14 02:12:59 +0000 UTC]
Holy cow, this is the best Avatar fanfiction I've read yet!!!
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SueaNoi [2011-03-20 14:40:09 +0000 UTC]
This is very awesome.
I shouldn't be slacking off from my work...but this is worth it.
*continues reading
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FerAc [2011-02-09 13:51:09 +0000 UTC]
this is simply brilliant, I love it
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rainbowspeckz [2010-12-19 21:21:05 +0000 UTC]
The way all the characters act is exactly like they did in the show, and the story is something that the creators probably would have made. I mean, this story is so legit it sounds like Mike and Bryan wrote it. You are amazing!!!
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Lunasei [2010-09-22 18:21:59 +0000 UTC]
this is an awesome story so far. anywho I found it in the group it's in "continuance after the war. The cover image isn't showing which is probably why you probably missed it. I had to really look through the stories myself. Anywho awesome start. is going to get read the read of the chapters ^ ^
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Lunasei In reply to Capt-BA [2010-09-22 20:07:31 +0000 UTC]
yes I am from ASN :] I'm in a lot of other groups too on line.
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Lunasei In reply to Capt-BA [2010-09-22 20:10:45 +0000 UTC]
oh okay. I thought it was for fics that dealt with their ideas of season four lol. sorry about that.
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Lunasei In reply to Capt-BA [2010-09-22 21:00:30 +0000 UTC]
lol
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Cat-Orb-Shop [2010-09-19 19:52:56 +0000 UTC]
does this has a catacory? like Zutara or something?
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Cat-Orb-Shop In reply to Capt-BA [2010-09-20 15:55:19 +0000 UTC]
oh, okay, thanx
I'm gonna try it!
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HawkTnz [2010-09-15 10:45:36 +0000 UTC]
wwwhhhoooaaa!!!!! I hope they get you working on the new series!!!!! Fantastic.... I'm hooked!!!! LOL.....
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Destiny-Smasher [2010-09-11 16:59:09 +0000 UTC]
Cool cool. It's nice seeing some of the consequences of everything that the series culminates in. Politics are always a fun thing to incorporate into fully realized fictitious worlds like this. But you're obviously still maintaining the characters personalities and tinkering with some of their defined character traits.
I like the idea of the Fire Nation not being respected or forgiven. I've only hinted at that struggle in my own work (since it's derivative of what my fic's more about) so it's cool to see I'm not the only one who has thought about just how much WORK poor Zuko has ahead of him.
It's also in-line with some of the creepy Earth Kingdom people to act the way they act. Based on stuff like Avatar Day and the Ember Islands Players I would assume that they, too, would mess stuff up.
I think I will probably continue to read this one chapter at a time. I'd be rather appreciative and honored if you gave mine a read - I know you've already read parts of it, at least.
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Redhead-Lion [2010-09-04 17:02:40 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing! i could see and hear every single one of the characters saying and doing everything you wrote!
right now, im sorry i dont have the time to read all parts in one time... but ill try! XD
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Redhead-Lion In reply to Capt-BA [2010-09-05 07:51:39 +0000 UTC]
its amazing! i wish they would make this season four for real!!!
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