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Published: 2010-05-08 15:36:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1479; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 87
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Did this one a couple of days ago. Its mostly a BGA test, and it serves as my wallpaper.Any critique is welcome... ANY!
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Such beautiful graphics, truly amazing
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Really? thank you, I did my best when I made it.
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Well u succeeded
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Amazing use of colour and rule of thirds! The green, red and blue compliment each other really well in this composition.
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Thank you very much, I am glad someone still likes this old piece.
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Thank you! It took more time than usually.
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det virker dumt at du sΓ¦tter critige pΓ₯ nΓ₯ du godt ved at den bagerste mur er anderledes, men pΓ₯ den anden side er det ogsΓ₯ en test for at se om de overhoved ligger mΓ¦rke til det
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Det kan vΓ¦re at der faktisk er nogen som har noget at sige til mit lineart, karakterne eller skyggerne pΓ₯ karaktererne, som der ogsΓ₯ er en der har sagt noget til. Der er altsΓ₯ andet end muren, og jeg har fΓ₯et mere ud af det.
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That must be a lot .... and I mean a LOT of work to do all these details. Your colour compilation is always perfect.
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Danke! Dass ist sehr net von dir.
Yes it did take a little longer than my usual works, mostly because of all the stone...
Thanks
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Wow, nicely done. I see U decided to spend more time on this piece, great decision! I love those colors and all the details.
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Thank you, I wanted to try out a new type of background.
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Tak, jah... Du har jo set den fΓΈr.
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Thank you! It's maybe not very pro placing the characters where I did, but I was mostly focused on the BG.
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ohh.. i think it still looks good xD
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Can I like... be your apprentice or something?? 
I'm lovin the stone blocks and such. I feel like the stone wall in the background is too perfect (the are no cracks or anything) and doesn't fit in with the "ruins" look you have goin on. That's the only thing that's bothering me. But dude, this is seriously amazing.
You always inspire me to work harder!
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Wow, thank you!
To answer your question... Yes, but you must have a code name, and be there whenever I summon you to carry out my evil plans.
You are totally right about the rocks in the Background, I just couldn't make them look alike!
I think I noticed, but forgot to do anything about it.
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Oh! Can I be called Screaming Cactus? D8 I always liked that name. *jumpy*
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First thought: Reminds me of fitter demons off of Hercules XD Very nice. I like this piece.
Some places that could use work:
I'm not sure what the green blob,rock,thingy is supposed ot be. But if it was ment to be a goo-slime puddle of some form you should make the shape mroe jelantious and soften the shading. If was supposed to be a crystal of some form you should make the shape of it more jagged and less smoot as well as adding a thrid shade to it, you'd need some shiny parts >_> Or maybe I'm just obsessed with shiney things, either way!!!
Also, the Demon things are really awesome. But you need a thrid lighter shade yet again, for depth.
On both f those, it's not that you dont have the lighter shade really, it's just that you didn't use enough of it >_< I'm not sure how to put this in word properly . . .So I'll do my best.
When I'm drawing a piece I normaly take a base color and do everything in that. Later I go over it and add in the darker color where lights not going to hit or is going to be very little of it in. Then I blend the edges of those two together for a start. After which I go back and either A: add a lighter colro and blend it. Or B: Use and eraser and lightening tool to take color out of the area where most light it going to hit. But I o so in a way that curves or doesn't curve acording to the design of the object. Your green thing needs to have more foum, I think, and your demons are almost perfect but could use some detailing work.
Your walls are great, but then again, I don't really ever draw walls >_< So I can't help you with that. . .
Before I stick my foot any further in my mouth I'll leave you with this:
Wonderful picture, very greekish looking, love the style, color, and everything about it.
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Thanks for the great feedback!
You are right about the diamond, it could have been more flashy. I will make sure to remember that for the next time!
I guess the characters could have used more details, but at some point I guess I ran out of good ideas. I will have to practise some more.
Thanks again for taking your time making such a good critique!
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Eh, quiet my pleasure. I know that sometimes when you do a drawing it just starts with a bunch of random lines on a piece of paper that you let take fourm on their own. It's like majik from the mind 
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