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CaptainKharma — The Griffin, the Danger from Above
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Published: 2016-02-26 09:09:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 662; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 0
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Hello!
I like how you draw clouds here. Also you have not bad for beginner understanding of light and shadow and anatomy of griffin. Hover, I see here some issues.
Firstly, your griffin looks a little fat and short, because you lost ribcage of it. Secondly, the griffin's wings looks broken. For better understanding, bones of bird's wings look like our hand. Also feathers on the wing have certain structure. I recommend you to search some photos of wings and also look at this tutorial:
www.deviantart.com/art/Bird-Wi…
What about hind legs? You draw them not bad, but paws too big and they constructed not very right. For help you may look this tutorial: www.deviantart.com/art/Paw-Tut…
Now the beak... Beak is 2 parts of scull and they are must be separated.
karisean.deviantart.com/art/Ho…
Also you should to find some photos with beaks in this position.
Another issue is front legs. You draw them in very different foreshortening.
About coloring. You should to make more details and don't blur so much
In addition, some advices : try to study some other foreshortening, perspective and composition. And I think, in future you will make good illustrations e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Hope it helpful. Good luck!
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Wow thanks you a lot for all the advices and links (be sure that I will watch them 
Your critique is very complete and I'm glad that you take the time to analyse all the picture.
I continue to try to improve myself despite of the constraints of time and apparence ask by the editor of the game.
And it's very hard to have a specific style and keep rigor about details and anatomy, so thanks again for tutorials !!
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You're welcome. ) If I was now at home, I could make also overpaint, but I can't.
Style coming gradual himself. In example, I really don't know how I make my own style
And I'm glad that it was helpful ^^
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