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CaptainMisuzu — [ Chibi ] Captain Misuzu is here for you !

Published: 2013-09-13 21:06:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1913; Favourites: 72; Downloads: 0
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Description Hello my Sweeties <3

I think it's time for me to present myself !
I begin with a chibi neutral version of me, maybe next time i'll wear my Pirate Outfit o/

I love wearing red things and always have my hairs like this.
I think i'm kinda... normal, just neutral.


So i'm saying hello to tou all <3







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If you like it, i would love to see your feedback or working for you <3 Please have a look on my commission info !

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Comments: 63

Enemom [2013-09-18 21:02:26 +0000 UTC]

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For a chibi, it certainly has that chibi style down, but this one is so overdone and looks so generic, i can't really give it a high originality rating. It also seems to lack basic anatomy, as seen in the arms and feet. They don't work like that. And also, chibis should have at least some defining gender specific features such as hourglass hips and broader shoulders.

As for the shading, I can't really say much other than work on it. Shading adds a level of depth to pictures, and for well done chibis, it's an essential. I just don't see a high level of work done here.

However I will complement you on the color choice, that is done well.

Overall, I am neutral on this picture. It has potential, but a lot of work needs to be done.

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dATrade In reply to Enemom [2013-09-18 21:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Hello there~!   This critique has been submitted through =dATrade and is currently pending approval by the artist. If you feel that the critique is unfair or to your dissatisfaction, please read through the Critique Guidelines and send us a note within 48 hours to receive a refund of your points.

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CandyBeautiful [2013-09-18 19:15:36 +0000 UTC]

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This is absolutely astonishing! At a first glance the picture looks as if it were a complete scene staged by a professional photographer or painter, but when you take a closer look, each separate picture is revealed, but still blends together beautifully.

The placement of everything seems to be prefect, from the position of the women to the position of the little lily pads and little stones.

The picture itself looks like a scene from a fantasy film or movie. The hazy, fog filled background makes the woman command a bolder presence, and because of the red/pink coloring in the background, the green of the moss and blue of the water stands out. Also, because of the picture the swan was originally in, it seems to glow in the picture, which only adds to the mystical feeling of it.

If I were being really picky, I'd say that the swan seems to draw the gaze away from the woman a little more than it probably should... but overall, I love it~ :3

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Enemom In reply to CandyBeautiful [2013-09-19 22:17:20 +0000 UTC]

Uh, wrong picture. 

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Mirage-Moonlight [2013-09-18 19:12:53 +0000 UTC]

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This is a very cute chibi! But there are a few flaws here and there.

First of all, there's not much shadowing in the picture, and it's especially needed in the hair. Also, I think you could add just a bit more to the background, because I don't think the few stars are enough.

On the pro side, I love how the head is shaped very much like a perfect circle. I also love how well you've drawn the eyes based on the angle!

Overall, you could fix the chibi up a little, but it still looks very great! Good job on the drawing!

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jerzyna-chan [2013-09-18 17:08:20 +0000 UTC]

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i like this drawing. she is a really cute chibi and her body language is right and her clothes really suit her. but, for another time, you should add some shadings to your drawing. also, she is a little thinner than a normal chibi. her smile is a little wrong, because the two lines should be in the same ''guide line''.. her hair look a little sketchy, and i think the reason is that you draw digital art and it is really difficult to draw realistic hair. and her glasses are somehow a little wrong, they are not straight. that's all...

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dATrade In reply to jerzyna-chan [2013-09-18 17:09:49 +0000 UTC]

Hello there~!   This critique has been submitted through =dATrade and is currently pending approval by the artist. If you feel that the critique is unfair or to your dissatisfaction, please read through the Critique Guidelines and send us a note within 48 hours to receive a refund of your points.

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MyC-chan [2013-09-18 15:04:44 +0000 UTC]

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A cute chibi, a cute cute chibi girl

I think the idea of a chibi with a transparent background is really nothing new so let me just skip that vision,originality and impact stuff.
It is a fine chibi work but it could look even better with some practise.

Parts that you could improve on are the face, the hands and feet,shadows.

The face is shaped like a nearly perfect circle. Something beginners love to do with their chibis. If you prefer those kind of chibis that is fine as well, i personally prefer the semi-realistic chibis that do not have a circle head. There are a few types of chibis. One is semi, they have a normal anime head but a tiny body, and another is the typical chibi with a big head but some typical elements. I can only suggest to search deviantart for chibis picking out some you like and paying attention to their head shape.

So let's just say the head is fine and you wanted to have a big round head. The eyes are still not matching it very well. For one the eyeshape, but even more iimportant is the shape of her lashes. Coping the lashes can lead to such mistakes as those, to make her lash appear on the wrong side. I can only suggest checking deviantart for tutotials on eyes and faces here.

Your shadows are very pale and they are needed everywhere. I am still scared to overdo it with the shadows myself and i know that when you are not sure where to place them you like to use pale shadows and blur them till you can't even see them anymore, but with practise you get used to where the shadows are.
Still i think you should try to use darker shadows. Especially on the cloths, where folds appear and on the skin too. I also noticed you use a dark skin tone,and a grayish shadow tone. Try a more orange or slightly pink tone, put it on multiply and draw shadows like that. I found out this looks way more natural than the typical grayish tone.

With the hands and feet i probably don't have to say much. They are fine,especially for a beginner chibi but with some practise they could look even better.

I wish you good luck with practising and creating more cute stuff like this. With some practise shadows and faces will look better and better so just search for tutorials and keep on drawing ~

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CaptainMisuzu In reply to MyC-chan [2013-09-18 15:43:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you !

All your advice will really been useful :3

I'm at the beginning of chibi so critique with advice was really what i was searching for : )!

Thank you :3

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MyC-chan In reply to CaptainMisuzu [2013-09-18 17:57:48 +0000 UTC]

happy to hear that

i really like chibis i wish i had more time to draw those 

Good luck with them ~

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Wilku333 [2013-09-18 13:44:16 +0000 UTC]

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Here are the details of an average-good. Why do I think?

Well, I do, but unfortunately I do not like the empty space behind the figure, because the image becomes very informative and in fact has little to tell the picture. The only thing that saves this style of drawing the characters, which is done very well. I drew attention to the line here, patterns, details and more. If for this character was some background even a modest release, it would be better, and how much it has to other critics are appreciated. Shows a good image, despite the fact that there is no background, there are only optionally these small stars, which add some pep to impart the form of climate. It could have been better, but it's not bad.

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CaptainMisuzu In reply to Wilku333 [2013-09-18 14:18:10 +0000 UTC]

It's normal there is no background, since the chibi will be re-used in other work. Almost all chibis don't have background o___o

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Wilku333 In reply to CaptainMisuzu [2013-09-18 14:19:34 +0000 UTC]

Therefore pointed out that the most likely is that such an idea, and not another. I expressed my opinion that I did not like.

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Fifedawg [2013-10-17 21:34:36 +0000 UTC]

#*Raises his hand to ask miss Misuzu a question* Miss Misuzu I broke something can you help me fix it? :c pwease?


(Lol sorry you don't have to respond )

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CaptainMisuzu In reply to Fifedawg [2013-10-18 05:46:43 +0000 UTC]

Does i look like a teacher of home improvement xD ?

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Fifedawg In reply to CaptainMisuzu [2013-10-18 06:59:33 +0000 UTC]

Ahahahahaha XDDD er I mean...yes ma'am :c


lol

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SweetEdIciones [2013-10-17 07:10:14 +0000 UTC]

muy lindo :3

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PurpleBallerina [2013-10-15 06:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Cute!

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CaptainMisuzu In reply to PurpleBallerina [2013-10-15 11:41:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you .o/

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jimjimfuria1 [2013-10-13 19:50:58 +0000 UTC]

# is a nice drawing in chibi style as a presentation to people, I remembered a friend looks much hair and glasses style she has perhaps lost your twin lol

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CaptainMisuzu In reply to jimjimfuria1 [2013-10-13 19:56:50 +0000 UTC]

Or maybe we are a hidden army @__@

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jimjimfuria1 In reply to CaptainMisuzu [2013-10-13 20:13:08 +0000 UTC]

# maybe they are coming together to take over the world and are a kind of clones as stormtrooper of star wars hahahah xD

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CaptainMisuzu In reply to jimjimfuria1 [2013-10-13 20:21:43 +0000 UTC]

It's totally possible \o/

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jimjimfuria1 In reply to CaptainMisuzu [2013-10-13 20:26:41 +0000 UTC]

# I'll alert the relevant authorities before the catastrophe happens ire besides buying a war bunker in case it gets out of control plus some weapons to prepare for the invasion

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Cisumi [2013-10-11 11:11:57 +0000 UTC]

nice coloring

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stichesBodyBagTtags [2013-10-10 21:52:33 +0000 UTC]

I love it , reminds me of myself

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CaptainMisuzu In reply to stichesBodyBagTtags [2013-10-10 22:40:45 +0000 UTC]

Aha~ 

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VivaFariy [2013-10-07 03:12:11 +0000 UTC]

#This is a chibi you? You look great! But on to the drawing....The hair is really nice.My favorite part is probably the eyes and glasses - great job drawing that.The outfit is also really good, and the pencil is really cute.

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CaptainMisuzu In reply to VivaFariy [2013-10-07 10:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Yes, have a lot to do to improve in digital media :3

Yes it's Mini-Me xD

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VivaFariy In reply to CaptainMisuzu [2013-10-08 00:32:35 +0000 UTC]

It's amazing!

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Jusnake [2013-10-03 13:48:15 +0000 UTC]

Cute! °u°

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Joia-Skywing [2013-09-30 07:56:21 +0000 UTC]

that's so CUTE!

#comment

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CaptainMisuzu In reply to Joia-Skywing [2013-09-30 13:06:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you !

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Joia-Skywing In reply to CaptainMisuzu [2013-10-01 04:47:23 +0000 UTC]

NP

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Thy-xin [2013-09-24 10:56:03 +0000 UTC]

#Ahhh... Nice job well done! I can see the effort you used to make it chibi-style. Quite a nice attempt, but I wonder if the lines are supposed to look a bit worn out intentionally? Anyway, good job still \o/

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CaptainMisuzu In reply to Thy-xin [2013-09-25 15:43:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh for the lines i'm still learning for lineart.

I understand how to make it clean, now.. they have to be more realistic xD

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Thy-xin In reply to CaptainMisuzu [2013-09-26 07:32:56 +0000 UTC]

mmmm ok \o/

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saranghaegurl [2013-09-24 10:01:30 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!

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Wei-mei [2013-09-21 14:34:16 +0000 UTC]

You need a looot of practice. Either anatomy or coloring looks very weak.

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theWitchofGrich [2013-09-18 09:00:42 +0000 UTC]

adorable!!

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CaptainMisuzu In reply to theWitchofGrich [2013-09-18 12:55:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you .o/

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theWitchofGrich In reply to CaptainMisuzu [2013-09-18 12:57:58 +0000 UTC]

you´re welcome good job!

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keidarkflame [2013-09-16 13:14:42 +0000 UTC]

Lovely!

Good timing too, I was thinking of asking you to describe yourself so I can do a sketch of you.

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CaptainMisuzu In reply to keidarkflame [2013-09-16 16:17:02 +0000 UTC]

Lol thank you x3'

I really have to train to make me as captain xD

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keidarkflame In reply to CaptainMisuzu [2013-09-17 10:08:41 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure. Now all I have to do is wait for the pirate outfit?


I think you're doing pretty well already, you handle everything like a boss.

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CaptainMisuzu In reply to keidarkflame [2013-09-17 13:40:27 +0000 UTC]

Yes i think i'll be able to do one one day xD

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keidarkflame In reply to CaptainMisuzu [2013-09-18 13:12:56 +0000 UTC]

I'll be looking foward then

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FAT8893 [2013-09-14 18:48:51 +0000 UTC]

Not bad. I love it!

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CaptainMisuzu In reply to FAT8893 [2013-09-14 18:50:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank You .o/

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Ozgeisik [2013-09-14 16:58:49 +0000 UTC]

its you ? oh god ! Kawaiiii )))) 

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