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CarlaJamz — The Band
Published: 2013-03-27 00:21:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 129; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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This is a sketch I decided to do of oldish OCs. I really like it!Its called 'the band' because these are characters I thought of last year and they were a band, the girl was bass, top dude was vocals, the blonde was drums and the guy on the right bottom was keyboard... they dont have any names but they sort of, kinda have a story. Tell me if you think I should develop the story further
COMMENTS AND FAVES VERY APPRECIATED!!
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The variety in the faces if GREAT! The gender of each character is visible at first sight, and despite that they each have very distinct lines and almost visible personalities.
I really don't have much to say here. It's beyond anything that I could recommend to improve.
Excellent work!
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Hello
Thank you!! That's kinda one of the reasons why her hair is so short, I hoped the gender would come through. And the main thing was personality so I'm elated that you could see that
thank you so so sooooo much!!
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It's no problem, I understand perfectly...
You're very welcome!! 
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Hello!
Profile is definitely a difficult thing to tackle, so I'll try my best to help!
For the most part, these sketches look pretty good! 
However, I think that your necks seem rather thin, especially at this angle. There are a billion different ways to solve this, so you have to experiment to see what looks best.
Also, to me, the foreheads seem a bit flat, but that is completely my opinion. (And they're your characters)
If you ever have any problems, I will always suggest references. I know some people say 'references don't make you better', but I believe that as long as you don't trace, references can be a huge help.
Here's a few i found while trolling google images. 
[link] [link] [link] [link] [link] [link]
And a tutorial, if you like. [link]
Hope I helped!
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Hello
Really?! I was worried they were too thick
Thank you so much for the references! I went through each one and the tutorial is cute, I really appreciate all the effort you put into this comment. I really do
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You're very welcome!
Necks are tricky things.
It's my pleasure! Sometimes I wish someone would've given me a swift kick in the butt, handed me some decent references, and ordered me to study them.
I'm really glad my comment helped!
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Lol glad I got the lesson earlier then
Thank you!
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