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Published: 2009-02-10 00:43:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 80; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 5
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Description The stars, they point to you
In your final moments of suffering
Too faded to even feel real anymore
And the liquor in your breath
It tells me quite well what your capable of
While the cigarette smoke around you that surrounds you
It'll give me a taste of the nicotine lies

Darling you use to be so special
The one that could transcend through my bloody soul
Your worth more than you choose to acknowledge
Lost in the aftermath of your problems
Do you even know when the days change?
Or when a new year ends, marking the arrival of another
These rings of impurity that surround and brand your eyes

Our daughter has grown up quite beautifully
And your son has chosen to erase you
No matter how bad things get, it still wont break you
The slave to an addictive tyrant that lives off of death
You don't even remember my name
All you can do is try to forget the problems you claim to have
In reality you never needed an aggressive outlet

Now, now you lie on your bed with nothing
Looking at the broken ceiling that rejects you
You want to call me but I've been forgotten
You want to call your handsome son but you've been forgotten
And your daughter has now ended up like you...
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Comments: 3

HaleyHurricane [2009-02-10 05:14:15 +0000 UTC]

Breath taking.

Keep them coming!

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CarnageCrow In reply to HaleyHurricane [2009-02-11 04:19:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!
xD
i'll tryy

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HaleyHurricane In reply to CarnageCrow [2009-02-11 04:59:03 +0000 UTC]

Goooood :]

I'm working on a new poem.

Well, thinking of something.

Thanks for inspiring me

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