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Carreauline — Aktion Dokomi 2012
Published: 2012-05-25 09:53:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 687; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 5
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As today my group told me "oh well, we're going to have an auction on the Dokomi" I was in full panic: I didn't even start xDSo this is my part in the auction!
It's supposed to be a broken mirror, though I think that it's not that visible... Character is my OC Yuzo
It's been a long time since I last drew with traditional media, so please be gentle
I always have the problem of the skin getting too light, even though in the beginning it seems too dark... have to work on this.
Kommt doch an unserem ArTogether-Stand vorbei, wenn ihr auf der Dokomi seid! :3
Ich würde mich freuen ^^ b
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This is pretty! There's only one issue I have, and that's with the light reflected in the eyes... for some reason it looks really out of place. like maybe it should be a little more transparent? Or smoothed out or something? Other than that, I think this is really amazing!
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Ah, I guess I know what you mean ^^
I realized I scanned it before adding the highlights with white acrylic paint, so I retouched this with Photoshop. That's why it looks so "sharp" I guess.
Thank you so much for your comment~
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Oh, okay! I think it looks great other than that, and I can see how you'd do that. I've done stuff like that before T.T
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Thank you so much~~ I'm glad you like it, this really pushes me to draw on!
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wow amazing the details are soo awesome O 3 O!! and the hair XOO its amazing!!!
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Thank you so much~
I'm glad you like it! ^o^/
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O 3 O no problem ∩(︶▽︶)∩!
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I can't exactly tell if you got critiqued or not yet... I don't speak german XD
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I have been a little, but nevertheless feel free to tell me your opinion, if you like to xD
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Ok then.
*ahem* I'm from MA-I and I'll be critiquing you today.
This is honestly a very good piece. I only have a few thing to point out and everything else is perfect! I absolutly love the was you colored it and make such an even tone with colored pencils and the color choices were very good.
The only things I have to point out is the collarbone and the nose. The collarbone from the angle I'm seeing suggested is a little farther down her chest and the nostrils aren't quite... vertical at such an angle. More horizontal than anything.
And if you wanted to give the impression of a broken mirror then maybe adding more shards around the main piece.
Very good work. Keep it up!
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Thank you very much!!
I'll try to keep your advice in mind for my next one!
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You're welcome! I hope to see your next work.
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Ah okay, schick. Wobei du hier den Mut haben solltest das Gesicht auf mehrere Splitter des Spiegels zu verteilen. 
Das macht das Bild interessanter. Ist aber schwierig das Gesicht so zu splitten, dass es cool aussieht. XD Der Schlüsselbein ist an beiden Seiten zu lang. Zumindest wenn ich so meinen Körper so anguck.. XD
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Jaa, das war auch eine sehr hastige Aktion x'D
"Mal eben so" ein Bild für morgen herzuzaubern ist ein bisschen schwer
Aber sowas will ich unbedingt auch mal ausprobieren *__* EIgentlich mag ich sehr viel ausprobieren, aber immer wenn ich es tue, dann geht es in die Hose x'D
Jaah, die leidige Anatomie... ich gebe mir Mühe zu lernen! x3
Danke für deine Tipps!
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Woww, es sieht toll aus *_*
Würde es gerne echt sehen, vielleicht schaff ichs ja mal vorbeizuschaun xD
Die Haare gefallen mir total gut und auch der Ausdruck insgesamt!
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Das wär total cool~~
Vielen Dank!
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