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CarrionTrooper — Zaryan Trooper Karachov
Published: 2007-11-11 11:22:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 2747; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 52
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This is one of the main characters of Trooper, an alternate WW2-like world. Mikhail Karachov is a trooper of the Zaryan army. Zarya is the largest nation on this world of mine, and is somewhat like Russia. The who, what and how of the Great War is still under development, so I can't say what nation is going to be Zarya's enemy or ally. But one nation for sure is the enemy of Zarya: Heidlheim. Mikhail's friends in the war is Romio Raphaelov, a tank driver who is to be a commander; Jochen Noborski, a trooper who will become special ops; and Nadya Cherkassova, also a trooper. Mikhail also have a childhood friend, Anya Radyzski, who stayed behind in their village.Feel free to add to this universe of mine. Add countries, world events, and the like. I will be grateful and credit you if this ever becomes a comic. For example, a highschool friend of mine, Adri, got a country, which is New Almechia. There's also another friend, Dika, who made a country called Castelio. Go ahead and post ideas below!
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Comments: 46
Such is the way of the Slav! Here, have a gopnik award
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How about another concept for alter-Japan, like Akatsuki (dawn) or Murasame (passing shower)?
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His expression is the 'oh crap there's a machinegun nest over here' kind
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I really like how you draw the profile of the face, it's very attractive
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I likeee,
On a more serious note, I wonder how my own faction (Imperia) Would fair against this...Zarya
You will fear our superiority over the deep blue skies and the hell that rains from the iron dragons above >
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Well, do tell! they may be incorporated to this Trooper universe, which Zarya is but a part of it. I'm trying to get as much factions in this alternate-world WW2-like storyline...
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Sweet, I'll note you with some minor details
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Oh, if you're interested in Imperia, just say so, I'll get back to you.
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well done, the colorings is amazing! the shading is superb and the lines are neat and clean...
i also love the idea of your story
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Awesome work! I always love a Change in History XD epically WW II XD
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woh! senjatanya M1 garand? atau mosin nagant?
soalnya Rusia make Mosin Nagant pas jaman2 itu
dan modelnya mirip M1 garand? apa emang M1 garand?
namanya iyah...kurang Rusia bang...
mungkin Karazov lebih mengena
tapi gapapa lah udah itu juga bagus
ini cerita lama masi dilanjut??
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Oiya, kalo mau kasih negara ya silakan lho... ato teknologi apa mesin perang... ini bebas, kayak Blood Reign gitu...
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negara...?
hmm......
Rusia terpecah2....ada negara Moscow, Volgograd, Siberian Federation...
gmana tuh?^^
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Ini bukan dunia ini lho... petanya aja beda... jadi harus orisinil, meski ada aksen-aksen negara dari dunia kita gitu... Dan di dunia ini yang jadi analogi Rusia mah Zarya... gitu. Zarya = Rusia + sedikit eropa timur + barat dikit gitu...
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woh!
saya punya ide....
hmm....
Schafburg?
Nizhnikovsky?
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Silakan silakan! Kalo punya ide bisa dibikin jadi deviation prose gitu... Biar ngga pusing nyarinya, dan bisa di-fave! TULIS TULIS
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eh maksudnya gmana tuh bang? blum ngerti saya 
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yah, kalo submit deviation khan ntar ada kategori prose gitu jeng... tu buat yang tulis2 selain puisi atuh...
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Yup, masih lanjut. Dan tu senapan ga ada di dunia nyata... judulnya ZYR-5.
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woh! keren juga
upload desainnya dong...
mau tengok...
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Weks! Kayak M1 garand kok, cuman bolt-action dan magazin ga keliatan...
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iya hahahaha
keliatan mirip dari barrelnya yah
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Sounds neat, although somewhat like Chronicles of Valkyria.
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Never heard of it. The idea was made around 2004 or 2006.
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nice unit design
and perfectly realistic, just the kind of young people sent to the front as canon fodder
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Well, I intend to make a story with this guy as the main character. He got drafted into teh army, that's for sure!
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Pretty nice, but with such a blizzard, you'd think that he'd have heavier clothes on.
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not a blizzard, just a flurry...
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Yeah, but still. He just looks like he needs heavier clothing. (Hey, it said "Advanced critique encouraged!")
Great picture, though.
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Better wok on the names...
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Well, Zarya isn't supposed to be a direct copy of Russia, I mixed up some Eastern European in there too. Suggestions are more than welcome!
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Than the only problem is with the last names of the ladies. -ov- is a male ending, the female would be -ova-
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Ah! Thanks for the suggestion... I'll modify it.
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Hey, that's pretty awesome! I think you've done a good job with it. Nice clean linework and a very good colouring job (very tight, it looks like it was professionally done!) Good job with the expression and details too (I don't think I would have ever gotten that gun right). Well done on this, it looks great.
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Ssankyoo! The coloring is kinda noobish, I just added shadows where they are in a separate layer (multiply baby!) and details... no ruler!
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Really interesting! I like ideas like this ... ww2 parallel worlds ... and that you want others to put ideas into it is really nice too
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Ssankyoo! Any ideas? Wanna jump in the fray?
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Well sure id like to give my input ... if you tell me more about it all and tell me how the already invented nations are like so i cant copy one
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Okies, when I have the details I'll note ya.
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