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vintageaerith [2009-06-17 21:23:01 +0000 UTC]
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I got SO excited seeing this in my inbox. The detail is evident from far away and the off-center composition is really something awesome!
The outstanding strengths in this piece, in my opinion, are the transparent cloth, the stone/crack work, and the poses. I really enjoy the way you implied the shadows on the sword behind the cloth, it boggles me how you can imply that with COPiCs! The stone also looks fantastic and the poses are very dynamic. ACK, the whole thing is so beautiful that I can't bear writing a critique on it, but if you're looking for it, I figure I can offer a few things I think would make it even better!
This first thing might seem trivial, but you have two different "wind sources". xD I understand that you probably wanted to have Noctis' clothing moving dynamically in the portion of the picture where it can be seen clearly, but it's moving in a different direction than Lightning's hair, cloak, and the scarf tied to her sword. Perhaps you could've edited the poses so that you could show more of the Prince so that everything'd be moving in one direction. Again! That's a TINY thing, and I'm SURE the majority of viewers would never see it. xD But it's little things like that you realize after the fact, that make you go *doh*--I've done it pleeeenty of times before, believe me.
In terms of color harmony, Noctis is getting a little lost against the stone work...next time, maybe try a different variety of grey, or maybe tint it with a different color? Maybe Noctis' clothing would even look nice with a slight slate blue tint or something? That's totally an opinion thing and definitely not an error, but Lightning stands out so nicely that Noctis could use a bit of emphasis.
This is a gooorgeous piece, my dear, and I hope you do another one of those print-packs post-AX so that I can buy from you again...your stuff makes my dorm bulletin board so pretty! <3 I hope that was a fair assessment and I am still a huge fan of yours, keep up the amazing work.
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FantasyRebirth96 [2017-05-11 23:53:10 +0000 UTC]
Really looks great here~ Yes well done indeed^^
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typhoonknight95 [2015-06-30 19:40:20 +0000 UTC]
don't noctis you could do so much better then lightning lol
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Pisokely [2014-09-24 11:52:06 +0000 UTC]
WOW O.O JUST AMAZING >.<
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Chaoticotaku [2014-08-18 17:20:41 +0000 UTC]
This is incredible *w*
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CommanderPrussia [2013-10-03 02:51:55 +0000 UTC]
Noctis x light forever.
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GreenSimon [2013-07-31 01:51:12 +0000 UTC]
Omg, awesome :Q___
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cutieisevil [2013-07-11 09:44:39 +0000 UTC]
i had my mouth open when i saw FFXV's gameplay. plus, THIS IS AWESOME!
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RitsukiXShuuko [2013-02-18 18:27:59 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful! But seriously, I ADORE the sword.
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Sese-chan99 [2013-01-02 19:06:40 +0000 UTC]
Wow, awesome, awesome, AWESOME :3
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FoxfurNeo [2012-12-15 06:03:13 +0000 UTC]
Omg great Final Fantasy artz c:
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11Uehara11 [2012-09-01 12:40:35 +0000 UTC]
lighting *_*
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Thinkingninja1 [2012-08-19 04:10:22 +0000 UTC]
Amg amg amg so sexay! I love this, I love you, I love this, I love you, I LOVE IT ALLL AND YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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HumbleArtist123 [2012-08-01 14:54:09 +0000 UTC]
The hilt of his sword is a motorcycle engine... How does that work?
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Chungphantomhive [2012-07-09 18:27:43 +0000 UTC]
Idk if I've already commented on this, but I wanted you to know your super talented and I love your work...
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Zazabella [2012-06-24 17:14:48 +0000 UTC]
NICE!
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ringo97 [2012-06-23 14:08:55 +0000 UTC]
that's... BADASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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vocaloiddjartist [2012-06-19 16:04:48 +0000 UTC]
oh my god!!!!!!!! that is BEAST lol i just said beast not like me but this is amazing!!!
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BladeOfValhalla [2012-06-11 20:37:23 +0000 UTC]
._. you have made my day............
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HumbleArtist123 [2012-06-11 20:06:05 +0000 UTC]
The hilt of his sword is a V8 Engine...
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FreyaAbendstern [2012-05-29 17:59:16 +0000 UTC]
fantastic work
(cant wait to play versus 13)
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Spirele [2012-05-14 02:03:35 +0000 UTC]
I see Lightning still looks as angry as ever
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saillytheshippy [2012-04-28 11:43:57 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE these too. Got me stuck on FF again. Lightning is my favorite ever! I heard she is a knight for a goddess or something...wonder if u would know more? Saving up for game...
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SammySideUp00 [2012-04-20 13:09:22 +0000 UTC]
OH GOSH. AWESOME.
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Inphinity0101 [2012-04-07 15:53:56 +0000 UTC]
This style reminds of the art from the Tales series, not quite sure why lol. Excellent work though, and I'm impressed its entirely non-digital (I think Noctis' shirt kind of give that way XD).
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Ultimatefullmetalfan [2012-04-01 04:22:52 +0000 UTC]
I love how you put so much detail in it! It's amazing!
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yomanw [2012-03-06 04:01:21 +0000 UTC]
your not a cartoon girl!
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MangaDice [2012-02-21 02:09:29 +0000 UTC]
I dunno, his cape looks really good as a hole in the wall. XD Love you!
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RunerenX3 [2012-02-19 23:58:10 +0000 UTC]
mannn~
I LOVE the black comic marker.
It's absolutely wonderful cause unlike other black markers, you can't see the marker lines in the pic if you do it right;
so it look pitch black and perfect, *sigh* it's wonderful (#^^#)
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SuperNataria [2011-12-29 14:59:16 +0000 UTC]
Oh I have that game! It's really good, and your picture looks just like them!
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ValkyrieBane [2011-12-19 22:31:24 +0000 UTC]
Fucking unbelievable... How the SHIT do you DO that?! That's fucking AMAZING!
......inspiring. Just... inspiring. There are no more words in my brain with which to describe your masterpieces.
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ZennyMarchlog [2011-11-06 08:28:15 +0000 UTC]
hohohh lightning and (kung sino man niyan)who is that boy?
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