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bloatenator [2013-09-26 20:56:22 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, Laura Sharp's got my admiration and I support herΒ hopes andΒ dreams!!!
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hopethewolf1 [2013-08-26 11:51:34 +0000 UTC]
I love laura!
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FuyuStorm [2013-08-26 06:21:59 +0000 UTC]
* Take out my heart and put name Laura Sharp on it* .....I...love... you...Laura Sharp....
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megamanfan43 [2013-08-26 05:41:53 +0000 UTC]
Cute, I like her.
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Geeligans-i-Land [2013-08-26 04:24:47 +0000 UTC]
Is it ok that I can draw your character?
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Zexoguy [2013-08-26 04:06:31 +0000 UTC]
I love these sketches. Laura really is your most beautiful OC ever.Β
I see her singing, showing off her wings (I guess), practicing her scaring, relaxing, studying hard, and the one on the top middle kinda looks like she's about to sneeze to me.
Very nice.
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SwordSparks [2013-08-26 03:23:28 +0000 UTC]
The last day of summer is happening everywhere! Β
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Energywitch [2013-08-26 03:16:51 +0000 UTC]
Wow, she's lovely.
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victortky [2013-08-26 03:06:46 +0000 UTC]
Nice sketches, I liked the way you have drawn Laura's facial expressions and her postures, which are fitting to her character personality and design.
Top left: Somehow I can't shake the feeling Laura's standing on a large slab or rock or a stage in preparation for a song, or otherwise posing for art class. XD Her closed eyes, her relaxed wings, and her hand which was on her chest resembles a singer about to sing her signature song, or a being that was about to take flight. Very elegant and beautiful.
Top middle: The "You have got to be kidding me." face. I think Laura has saw something incredibly awkward and she couldn't believe what she was seeing. The narrowed eyes sealed the deal.
Top right: Nice way of showing her wings, I like they droop down from her back.
Lower middle: Scaring class? I can imagine her demonstrating the skill she proposed in the test to Professor Derek Knight.
Lower Left: Studying is hard. And studying two books at once is a little difficult for a monster with only two eyes, but not impossible. (there is a scene in MU that a monster with 3 eyes is studying 3 separate books at once)
lower right: Relaxing? Guess this is the part Laura is alone in her own dorm. XD
Nice work! Hope to see more Laura in future!
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Cartuneslover16 In reply to victortky [2013-08-26 03:32:54 +0000 UTC]
Graceful yet anxious, that's what I had been vying for.
Honestly, that's kind of what some guys see when they 'fantasize', in Squishy's case, seeing her hold her body like that was what he dreamed when he saw her for the first time.Β
Tried to make her expression there appear more nervously sensual, as why her hand is caressing below her neck. It's just another stretch.
One would say, 'Look at the wingspan on that beauty...'
Yeah, plan to work more with that pose.
Having missed 2 weeks of her first semester at MU, you only SEE two books in this sketch for now.
Basic stretching. A little more sensually given, I might add. Β
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victortky In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2013-08-26 03:48:12 +0000 UTC]
And she does show both, in these sketches. For me, it's more of "graceful", due to the postures you have given Laura.
hehe, and a nice fantasy at that too. Really shows her graceful side. Would be better if there is a full moon in the background, and the moonlight illuminating her form. XD
nervously sensual? Kind of true, I see, so that is why her hand is caressing below her neck, although to me it seems her hand is closer to her chest.
true. She has a nice length of wingspan, and I am sure there are monsters who find her wingspan beautiful.
Really predator like...judging from the pose, and as though about to spring on an unsuspecting target.
But I am sure there is a small stack in a corner. XD
Oh I see...sensually given? It seems to me that she's relaxed. XD But the face tells me what you are saying.
I have a few little ideas:
1) You should do a sorority picture with Laura and all her friends!
2) Another is scenes of Laura with squishy!
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victortky In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2013-08-26 06:46:55 +0000 UTC]
Well, that can be cured in time with her friends constant companionship.
Yup, and that shows her character and personality down to the core.
I understand, but her hand is on her chest than base of the neck...
I see, true...which is interesting, but I am sure she can easily get a MU jacket from the store in campus. (custom made with two holes for her wings at the back) Looking at the characters, I noticed a large majority of the monsters don't wear any clothing at all in MU, save for those who are in the frats and sororities, or like chet, wears caps instead.
Younger Laura, that is.
Well, there's always help coming when you can source for it. I would definitely like to see their trademark uniforms and then followed by the new and improved ones that would be worn at the finals. You can show the difference and the design for the two different types of uniform, and Squishy's mother can definitely help out in this category. Have you thought of a name and abbreviation for Laura's sorority?
Awesome, that would happen nicely! I would also like to see a series of sketches on MU school life for Laura.
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victortky In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2013-08-26 07:13:05 +0000 UTC]
ah that is interesting! I am sure it would be nice to describe how the MU design for Laura looks like in one of the chapters.Β
That is indeed heartwarming to hear.Β That is what friends are for!
I am sure you will know what's best for all your OCs. Awesome!
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BlueWriter93 [2013-08-26 03:01:55 +0000 UTC]
she kinda reminds me of the headmaster
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amothershed [2013-08-26 02:53:05 +0000 UTC]
Same here ! does a great job of making the stories sound so real!
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amothershed [2013-08-26 02:51:47 +0000 UTC]
Same here :icon=Whitelighter5:!Β
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Lizlovestoons12 [2013-08-26 02:51:21 +0000 UTC]
I agree with you on the top left sketch! It looks amazing!
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amothershed [2013-08-26 02:47:33 +0000 UTC]
she's amazing
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