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Brokenstar belongs to Erin Hunter.
Spottedtail belongs to
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i thought spotted tail loved cedar blaze and dust pelt...............................
I'm confused now.
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She is training in the Dark Forest
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Firstly, Brokenstar and Spottedtail look like they are having FUN!
Fights should not be fun. They should have a more menacing look in their eyes. I know You really are good with emotion, WarriorCatsUnite.
Secondly, Brokenstar kind of looks like he is sitting up. If he IS sitting up, nice impression of it.
Other than that, quite good.
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I'd like to speak to your critique...if you don't mind. c:
Spottedtail and Brokenstar are sort of "play-fighting", they're battle training. I didn't think it should look like they were trying to kill eachother because it was friendly training session.
I do have to agree that Brokenstar's position is awkward in this drawing. xD
I was trying to portray him lying down, but arching his back as if he's trying to get up and shove Spottedtail off. (...If that makes any sense. cx)
Nonetheless, I appreciate the critique. c:
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Nice, why is Brokenstar smiling though? Is he ENJOYing fighting with her? That isn't a problem, I just wonder why. But thank you~
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I made him like that because they're TRAINING in the Dark Forest. It wasn't meant to be a real fight... so yeah. XD
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Oh yeah~ Now I understand!!! How could I forget?
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