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Published: 2013-05-22 10:57:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 2361; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 24
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Page 1 of my Captain Marvel samples.This is from issue #9 where Carol and Jessica join forces to fight dinosaurs rampaging in the city. Rawr dinosaurs!
Starting on page 2 tomorrow morning.
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That hair is fantastic.
Also, hey, did you see on Tumblr where Kelly Sue said she liked this?
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That is something I will always admire. I am trying this on my own an self-study - but the architecture and perspective... that is a bitter drink for me.
Lovely hands.
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Excellent work! Love the expressiveness of the faces and body language. I have two crits if that's okay. First is the last panel's perspective. With that POV, it could be better served to use 3-point. It would give more sense of movement and also eliminate the unnaturally acute angles happening in the buildings on the bottom right of the image. The other crit is panel two's border. I think you got rid of the top one because of the close tangent with the hair, but it stands out as an odd choice/lack of planning since the rest of the page has nice standard gutters. Since the inside of that panel is so nicely done, I wouldn't suggest re-drawing it, but select it in PS, nudge it down a bit, shave off the bottom as needed and draw in new gutters on the top and bottom. Overall though, this is excellent work and the editors should be impressed, imo!
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Beautifully done! The perspectives are really well and executed very professorially, namely, that they stay consistent from panel to panel. Great job!
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