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DemiDaWeeb [2017-11-22 01:12:41 +0000 UTC]
Overall
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Impact
Looking at colour, it has clear contrast from the character, background and other objects. Clever using a white outline to show the dominant part of the piece.
The feeling of the artwork is clearly personal celebration, but also freedom, and kind of rebellious with the rock fingers and as you describe by saying "**** school" jokingly, haha. #relatable
Clear improvement in style from previous deviations (and throughout your schooling assignments e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/> ). although the strokes of white in the background and past some of the character might be too thick of stroke,or there might be too much of them, not quite sure. otherwise it is so good.
The multi-coloured stroke is an excellent idea to make the audience follow the line while observing the while character. What I mean is you start with the pen and the character's facial features and then make focus towards the hair, body,and so forth until you reach the end of the stroke. If the end of the stroke was closer to the legs and feet it would be more impacted, show the red and white socks with detailed boots some love, they must have love from the stoke. X,,D Idk y i said that, sorry.
Amazing Work!! Hope you don't think the rating is too harsh, cause I want to see you improve. Whether its small or large improvement from newer deviations, continue doing your best and you'll do great.
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riverrio [2019-05-31 16:27:33 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations on Art
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Cassy-Rose In reply to Osmenn [2017-11-25 12:00:04 +0000 UTC]
awww thank you so much hun ;v; I'll need it =v=
and thanks!! much appreciated ;v;
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HuntressCuddlez [2017-11-22 10:20:34 +0000 UTC]
FREAKING YES ARE YOU KIDDING ME THIS LOOKS SO AWESOME!
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