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Published: 2008-12-31 15:14:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 411; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 7
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This took a while....Im still practicing colouring with photoshop and getting use to drawing with my tab....This is my OC Niaka, shes the dragon priestess
This is after she gets her heart stolen by a Demon and becomes his pawn ( its shens fault she got it stolen in the first place). This is Sometime later when things get depressing.
Critic please!!!! on anything o.o even if its my half ass cg skills ( yes nemo you can critic me too ) xD
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It's very good, but her eyes look a bit big and uneven. other than that, its great
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;u; ish my stylu~~<3 meh i'll make them smaller next time :3
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I know tis...but its all O.O
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If that describes it...
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YUSH it does 0w0 < it runs in the family
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Awesome- especially her scaly wings! Pretty colours too.
My crit is less about drawing and more about technique: You should draw on a larger canvas. I don't know what program you use, but when you start a new picture set the resolution to 300 and use a canvas waaay bigger than you intend the finished pic to be. Like twice or three times. That way, when everything is shrunk down a bit the picture looks all smooth and cool. Plus diddy details, like jewellery is easier too. ^.^
I keep looking at her eyes, they're awesome. Like spirals you could fall down.
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Thankyu so much!!!! I'll take your advice :3 
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woah-woah-woah-WOAH! dude! brilliant art, but niakas CHANGED so much! she used to be all cute n innocent! (bless her lil self!) and now shes all grown up! *sniff* well the colorins great, but niaka has has DEFINATLEY got a gothic touch about her now!
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tis cause she is evil D:> xD btw my story lines changed...its not samurais n ninjas any more xD
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OH! why? (i actually liked ur original story! 
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I couldn't be bothered to think of weapon names and samurai moves xD anyway i think the new ones better...and easier =3
Niakas not really evil but her heart gets stolen by a demon..( you'd understand i you knew my new storyline)
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poor niaka! 
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I actually had to research ancient japanese swords >_>
its officially snake guy =.= I like his name like that xD his mum forgot to name him....pfft i dunno im bein random
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xD haha epic expression!
thankyu very much ;w;
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So pretty 8D
I want her dress... I wanna read your manga~!
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Thankyu very much <8'D *tear*
I want her dress too ;_; i draw things i can never have....
My mangas still under construction
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I draw dresses for May that i can never have... it makes me sad D:>
YAAAAY! I love reading depressing manga XD
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I sympathise with you D:>
I love readin depressing mangas too xD emotions and all
My mangas quite depressing, >_> if i make it too depressing my friends gunn abe all like "YOU'VE CHANGED IT TOO MUCH!" *kicks my ass*
xD;;
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I love reading something that makes me emotional, for some reason. It makes me connect with the story and how the characters feel. :3
Lawl, I was thinking of stuff to add to C.a.g.e.d a couple of days ago... and I just burst into tears XDD
The characters grew on me, you know? And since C.a.g.e.d is just one GIANT depressing manga, thinking of plot makes me sad D:
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o___e <<< really wants to read face.
you think there could be such a thing as TOO depressing? o.o
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XD you should see me and Ena when we talk about some of the things that we want to let into the book, or setting up the plot for books to come.
We're obsessed with making the readers emotional and stuff, so to us, there is no such thing as 'too depressing' XD
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D8 damn ur mangas gunna be absolutly awesome! x3
i cry easily...
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Oh YES IT IS.
Its gonna be amazing... I hope o_o
Ah, I cry easily when it comes to manga, books, anime or movies.
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Th eday your manga comes ou ti'm gunna buy tissue..LOTS of tissue >:3 so i ish prepared!
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Its gets super depressing at this one point for the longest time... because Ile and Reat are so emo XD
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Just how I like them!
>:3 come to mummy my smexy emo bitches !!!
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Augh, you'll hate Ile during the sad parts though XD
He usually yells or punches Reat when it gets depressing...
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=___= thats UNACCEPTABLE!!!! Hitting the father of my kids.....>_> ill kill him!!!
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But they have angry sex afterwards, SO ITS ALL GOOD.
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o;o mmm they what? really? DON'T LIE TO ME!!!!!! D8< its not fair!!!!
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HURRHURRHURRRR... *shifty eyes*
reat gives Ile CPR at one point... that counts as something, yah? ;D
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YAH YAH!!!!
but doesn't Reat hate ile? he tries to ruin my husbands face!! D8>
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No, Ile hates Reat XD
Reat screwed Ile's life up... A LOT. Plus, Reat is plotting to kill May, who Ile is madly in love with XDD
But aside from trying to kill May, Reat screwed Ile up in more ways than one :<
But Ile is far more cruel to reat than reat is to Ile ;_;
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OMIGAWSH D:>
Im gunna jump in there and kill iLe! Reat is the father to my kids ;__;...
damnit hurry up caged! D:< fans are dying here!!
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No, Ile is Reats best friend. Ile hates Reats guts XD
Reat and Ile were friends at one point, but then Reat's father was killed and Reat went crazy. Ile cut off all ties with him, but Reat threatened to turn Ile into the police for murder. So, Ile was forced to be Reats partner in crime kinda. And plus, Reat is trying to kill May. Ile hates Reat so much XDD
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ILe kills somebody! D8< dun't tell me he kills reats daddy! or i'll hate him EVEN MOAR!!! despite his sexiness...
o__e *cracks whip at you* tone ! now!!
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Eh? No, Ile doesn't kill Reats dad XD
Later on in life, Ile only had 2 friends. His girlfriend (not May) and some other guy (Not Reat). Reat had been following Ile around for a while in secret, seeing if he could mess with him... and since Ile was diagnosed with depression and drug addiction, his girlfriend told him to cut off his medication (since he was addicted to it). So Ile basically freaked out and would get REALLY angry for no reason sometimes because he was trying to lay off the drugs for his girlfriend. Reat took this to his advantage, and suddenly showed himself again. He told Ile that Ile's girlfriend was cheating on him, so Ile got REALLY angry... and set his girlfriend on fire 8D
YAAAAAAAY.
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D:> .......
OMIGAWSH,.....
Thats so.....
EFFIN GREAT!!!!! >
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Iles so emo <3
I fucking love him XD
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and ilove emos! which means i MIGHT forgive him for mushing up my hubbys face...>_> MAYBE
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Hi-five for tryn to colour in photoshop LOL D= my tabs out of order *cries*
I think you're doing pretteh well man, the drawing itself is well done, and the colouring is really nice and put together
fkdefjioedj =0 don mind meh
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thankyuuu very much!!! and cause ur my first commenter you get a uber special hug!!!
remember i need critic!
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Wu-hay! Special huggles.
D; I am crap at critic for other people, but Im hella harsh myself.
You have the body down pretty well, and the hands are drawn really well, the dress fits her niceleh...
What sort of genre are you going for?
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i ...Have NO idea...0___0 if your talking style maybe shoujo....pfft >_> i wish...
my mangas shoujo and shounen
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Ahh yeah Shoujo! I think if her hair was larger then her head like...*cant explain...* Whats that manga called...
Well er yeah... *runs off*
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0____0 you confusled me....>_>
should i make her hair larger?
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Yeah I think a size larger, play around for a bit. =0 I think DA should have a doodle board chat, itd be easier to explain.
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