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cconstantine — You're the one my soul has chosen.
Published: 2011-12-11 19:27:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1040; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 6
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Description I always see your smile in my mind.
That crooked one I know you kind of wish wouldn't show as much.
I can't get your sweet voice out of my head.
That voice I know you keep working with until you get the tone you want.
Your lips? Don't even get me started.
Their touch is glued to my own and if I could, I'd kiss you every second of the day.
Oh and your hands...
I wish they could stay in mine forever, just to feel complete.

I've never said 'I love you' in this way before. Never this often.
I've never felt this way.
People think I'm just a stupid teenager, but then so be it. I don't care.
I loved you from the moment we started talking, and I've never stopped since.
Hopefully, the only one that'd be able to feel like I do, is you when you look at me.

Please, never leave me or shut me out.
You and me are my dream-ship, you're my soul-curer and my 'The One'.
Never forget that.

I'll be by your side even when you can't see me.
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Comments: 32

VictorHugo [2013-08-02 11:34:06 +0000 UTC]

Those feelings are tangible as a morning pillow, and as warm and soft.

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cconstantine In reply to VictorHugo [2013-08-04 12:49:25 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I guess they are!

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slipcast-chrysalism [2012-04-10 11:08:09 +0000 UTC]

This is really sweet.

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cconstantine In reply to slipcast-chrysalism [2012-04-10 11:25:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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4defyinggravity [2011-12-12 02:54:16 +0000 UTC]

Very sweet and emotional. ^_^ The only thing I would change is:

Hopefully, the only one who're able to feel like I do, is you when you look at me.

The first part of it just doesn't quite sound right.

Other than that, well done.

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cconstantine In reply to 4defyinggravity [2011-12-12 07:02:28 +0000 UTC]

Any ideas of how I might be able to fix it? ^^
and still, thank you!

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4defyinggravity In reply to cconstantine [2011-12-12 20:27:36 +0000 UTC]

I would maybe change it to: "Hopefully, the only one that'll be able to feel the way I do, is you when you look at me." Or something like that. Justget rid of that "who're" word. It sounds awkward

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cconstantine In reply to 4defyinggravity [2011-12-12 23:57:38 +0000 UTC]

Okay, it's fixed. I think?
Thank you again for your help.

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4defyinggravity In reply to cconstantine [2011-12-13 00:41:37 +0000 UTC]

Yes, much better. It's very nice

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Orange72 In reply to cconstantine [2011-12-12 18:48:39 +0000 UTC]

Not sure if someone mentioned this already:

"Who're" does sound awkward, I would use "who is"

Besides that, this is really sweet <3

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cconstantine In reply to Orange72 [2011-12-12 23:57:55 +0000 UTC]

And it's fixed, I think?

Aw, thank you! c:

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ginger-ninja-pom [2011-12-12 01:20:48 +0000 UTC]

this is great luv it

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cconstantine In reply to ginger-ninja-pom [2011-12-12 01:38:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you! c;

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leparklez [2011-12-12 00:06:49 +0000 UTC]

I know how you're feeling

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cconstantine In reply to leparklez [2011-12-12 01:01:21 +0000 UTC]

aw ^^ sometimes it's really amazing

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HeartofGold02 [2011-12-11 21:36:48 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful, I love it

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cconstantine In reply to HeartofGold02 [2011-12-11 22:01:19 +0000 UTC]

yeey, thanks! ^^

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HeartofGold02 In reply to cconstantine [2011-12-12 17:29:56 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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Shoujo-Slytherin [2011-12-11 21:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful...

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cconstantine In reply to Shoujo-Slytherin [2011-12-11 21:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~

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Shoujo-Slytherin In reply to cconstantine [2011-12-11 21:37:22 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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heisbreakingmyheart [2011-12-11 19:56:10 +0000 UTC]

This is just so beautiful and so sad... really and truely touching.

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cconstantine In reply to heisbreakingmyheart [2011-12-11 20:42:22 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you! ^^

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heisbreakingmyheart In reply to cconstantine [2011-12-11 21:37:41 +0000 UTC]

No problemo!

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Love-Undefined [2011-12-11 19:52:16 +0000 UTC]

I know the feeling.....beautiful, really.

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cconstantine In reply to Love-Undefined [2011-12-11 20:42:38 +0000 UTC]

I thank you for that. c:

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sinder117 [2011-12-11 19:45:55 +0000 UTC]

awww this is sooo cute i luv it

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cconstantine In reply to sinder117 [2011-12-11 20:40:07 +0000 UTC]

hehe, aw, thank you

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sinder117 In reply to cconstantine [2011-12-12 16:50:56 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome

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MqvzaAndGx [2011-12-11 19:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Aww. Love is... a great thing.

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cconstantine In reply to MqvzaAndGx [2011-12-11 20:42:54 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes, it sure can be.

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MqvzaAndGx In reply to cconstantine [2011-12-12 17:17:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Not everytime...

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