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CDing93 — In the Snow
Published: 2011-10-20 15:22:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 241; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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You and I played in the snow,projectiles flew to and fro.
I turned right around
and suddenly found
that I'd lost our battle in the snow
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Comments: 14
I really like it, actually. the rhyming is good, everything flows nicely, and it displays how I feel whenever my sister and I get into a snowball fight 
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I tried to capture the childish spirit of a snowball fight. And so I decided to write it in limerick form. I'm glad it was effective!
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you did well capturing the mood! ^^
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THATS SO COOL ><
i like how the last line says "i lost the battle"
it sums it up perfectly
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I wanted to get into the child-like mindset of a snowball fight. I took them pretty literally as battles when I was younger haha
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I wish I had a snowball fight. It never snows in Australia
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Well I suppose that's true...come visit the states during the winter months!
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I wish I could! but I'm waiting till I'm 18 and I can atleast drive a car
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It's snowing here right now...this is ridiculous.
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in darwin its always so warm and humid. I really wish I could see the snow
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It's nice to visit here, if you know where to go.
P.S.
Thanks for the fave 
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i'll visit there one day 
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