Balinese-Kitten [2012-11-12 20:12:36 +0000 UTC]
It's well written and uses good imagery. It makes the reader think of the feeling of sunshine on one's skin in late spring after a long period of cold, unpleasant (to some people) weather.
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CDing93 In reply to Balinese-Kitten [2012-11-13 17:39:48 +0000 UTC]
Looking at this again, I'm pretty sure I was aiming for death. You know, the whole "Light at the end of the tunnel" thing
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