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CDing93 — Tunnel
Published: 2011-12-09 18:44:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 227; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description As the tunnel grows dark,
there's a light at the end
A pinprick of hope
calling me in

Though I'm afraid
I continue on
There's not much choice,
all other options are gone

The light grows stronger,
it's kissing my skin
The subtle warmth,
I wonder what lies within

The light stands before me;
all that's left is this
and as I exit the tunnel
all I find is bliss
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Comments: 2

Balinese-Kitten [2012-11-12 20:12:36 +0000 UTC]

It's well written and uses good imagery. It makes the reader think of the feeling of sunshine on one's skin in late spring after a long period of cold, unpleasant (to some people) weather.

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CDing93 In reply to Balinese-Kitten [2012-11-13 17:39:48 +0000 UTC]

Looking at this again, I'm pretty sure I was aiming for death. You know, the whole "Light at the end of the tunnel" thing

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