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Ceasarman — Mirror Mirror
Published: 2012-05-14 14:46:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 648; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 5
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Mirror mirror on the wallShow me what I've come here for.
I've placed you in a golden frame,
For another sexual gain.
Mirror mirror melts my mind
For all I see make me blind.
These eyes like concrete vanity,
Open your personality.
Eyes green and yellow shine,
Everyday I'll make them mine.
This is love and love of you,
This mirror is built for two.
Mirror mirror change your view,
I'm not just worried bout you,
I'm not taking care of myself,
As long as you're in good health.
I don't sleep, I only weep,
For you in my mirror, creep.
Kiss the glass and call my name,
I'll take it down just the same.
I've done what is done and I don't regret it,
I loved to help you and don't forget it.
You and I are not meant to be.
This mirror has set me free.
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Comments: 9
In the third stanza, last line, I think you meant "built" and not "build." Other than that and the occasional breaking of rhythm, this is a very nice, imaginative piece. Well done~
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Why so I did, ammended, thank you 
Pfft who wants a rhythm to stay the same 
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I do. -lame ass- o x o
And you're welcome~ . w .!
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Just to make it clear i was saying my own excuse was lame arse
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I like this alot
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I cannot say if it was or not, I don't really remember writing it 
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Mirror, Mirror? Woulda thought thats a bit cliche for an indie such as yourself
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