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cecylicious — Beautifull Succubus
Published: 2010-03-21 21:46:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 846; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 48
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I wish I could do it better.Any Critiques or comments that will help me?
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Beautiful
Looks like someone press the kick button instead of the punch one
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I'm not an artist, so take what I say with a grain of salt.
Her shoulders seem a bit big to me. I could be wrong, but her legs look a touch on the thin side, while her arm may be a bit wider than it should be. Her neck also seems slightly too long. Other than those minor things, your succubus looks very good. Like I said though, I'm no artist. But I thought I'd comment on this piece since you wanted help and no one has helped you yet.
Oh, her fingers are a bit too wide near her hand and a bit too thin at the points.
Anyway, take care and have fun with your art.
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I guess I should say "shoulder", since I can't tell with the other one. The other shoulder actually seems a bit small, but don't quote me on that because my artistic experience is not good enough to give you a valid critic on that.
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Actually you are right on that, I didnt notice until you told me.
Thank you very much! I appreciate it a lot
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You're very welcome, Cecylicious.
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