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Published: 2012-04-06 11:25:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 636; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 3
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I only realize how skimpy that outfit is now...Trying to practice poses and semi-realistic stuff + anatomy. So what better way than to draw teenage fashion omg.
So have a human Feferi (uh, it was meant to be Feferi, but it's a bit OOC so you can pretend it's Meenah. or something) being a rich fish princess.
Anyway, critiques are always welcome! (Oh god, a bit nervous posting this omg)
Version without glasses because i wasn't sure which one looked better buh!:[link]
Art(C) Me
Feferi (C) Hussapalooza
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Comments: 8
defurhgfod AWESOME ;A;
The color scheme and background look great! And that hair aaa <3
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I actually had to do the hair over several times because i couldn't get the same amount of detail with the sketch QAQ
But thank you!
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Lazy critique.
Semi-realistically, that isn't anatomically correct.
Tummytums is way too long, bewbz looks off, the legs and the overall pose look awkward.
Not sure if you intended it, but the H and the glasses stand out way too much. You would only want to do that if you're trying to accentuate the eyes or the clothes.
On some areas, the line work could use some touching up.
Non-transparent background and a png file = no no. You'll lose some of the details/colors.
What you can do to improve - study more of anatomy and perspective, experiment more with colors ( use this if you want [link] ), practice drawing longer strokes.
That's pretty much it.
On to the positive side of things!
The color palette you used in this drawing is excellent. The purples and the skin tones definitely compliment each other.
The line work on the hair is amazing. I've always loved how you've drawn messy hairz.
I like how the background acts as vector lines, I think it makes this drawing really organized.
I really like how you drew the eyes! So perf, omg.
I've said this before, but I like how you draw those little lines to add more detail (On the armpitz and on the foot)
Overall, this is a really lovey drawing.
Nervous? I'm guessing you tried to draw something out of your comfort zone?
Anyway, I think it came out wonderfully.
/Lazy critique. Hope I wasn't too hard on you.
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Yeah pretty much haha, someone pointed it out to me on tumblr and I instantly saw it. Bummer because you don't notice things like that when you're drawing it, poo >:T
The glasses and H are homestuck colors so I needed to make it that one |D But I guess I could've toned it down some and it would've still been okay
Using SAI so yeah, trying out a different way to do lines and it came outweird hahaha. What do I save as when it's got a background?
Boo yes! The anatomy for this one was off the top of my head and I didn't really use any reference because I can never find pictures of people that match the pose in my head. I usually use colorpalletes.com when i play around with colors.
Oh gosh, I actually had to do that hair so many times and I was so unhappy with it. it looked a lot nicer on the sketch.
the background was sort of an after thought but thank you!
Yeah, heaps nervous XP New program, different style, and i was sort of worried it was too skimpy buh! but i think i learned a lot while drawing it so yeah
No, it was really helpful! Thank you for the critiqueeee
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You don't notice it while you're drawing? What? lol
.jpg and always set the quality to the highest.
If you study anatomy and perspective, you won't need any references for poses most of the time.
IF I can find my notes on anatomy, I'll give them to you.
If you're not comfortable and used to SAI yet, I'll give you corel painter to try out.
Out of all the programs I've tried, I find painter the best and the easiest for drawing lineart.
Then after, you can just color it on SAI or Photoshop or something.
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You know, like i'll sketch something out and i will be staring at it for so long i will accept it as reality and then boom. but i don't tend to notice a lot of little mistakes until aftr the whole thing is done.
Yes please! I need to learn anatomy pffff
I have corel and i hate itttt
I used it once and then never again. I really like the brush settings on SAI plus there's a lineart stabilizer so it's cool
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yewdidcool.
saw this in my inbox and I clicked eet.
and that was my critique.
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