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#freeverse #goodbye #love #poetry #spring #weather #winter #astir
Published: 2018-06-20 16:13:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 293; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description Breathe in, I whispered,
to your soft, pink cheek.
Snow floated gently
from the window to your lips,
making you gasp awake.

Open your eyes, I prayed,
and the most verdant green
spilled from your lashes.
The world stopped in awe;
my own breath hitched.
It rained, a fresh, spring rain
and voices bloomed in lieu of flowers.

Come to me, I dared, extending my hand.
But one step forward, and two steps back,
all force and uncertainty,
you fell
and I
couldn't
catch
you.

The clouds cleared,
and
I forgot.

Ruby red, the dress you wore
When seven gales serenaded you;
the whitest pearls adorned your neck,
but the black of mourning crept close by.

I forgot
that winter promised it would return
to fetch the laughter you bred with your small hands.

Don't go, I pleaded,
but your eyes looked past me
to the frail clouds above.
Did you know
that in heaven
it's always, always spring?
I asked while
my flooded heart said goodbye.
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Comments: 3

Pat-The-Kitsune [2018-06-21 11:10:26 +0000 UTC]

This is beautifully-written. :> I love the imagery you used here to describe the loss of a child in winter. It definitely meets the theme requirements, and I look forward to judging the entries at the end of the day. Thanks for submitting an entry!

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Cezille07 In reply to Pat-The-Kitsune [2018-06-21 12:23:02 +0000 UTC]

YAY! I'm happy to hear that. Thank you for your feedback

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Pat-The-Kitsune In reply to Cezille07 [2018-06-23 13:21:14 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome for the feedback. :> I just posted a 24 hour poll to help determine the winner of this contest. So you should know your standing within the next day or so (only two of you entered this time around, so you'll both receive prizes regardless, and the third place prize will be split between the both of you.) And if you wish to enter again in the future, the next contest prompt will be announced on July 1st.

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