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Published: 2011-07-25 17:04:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 195; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 1
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Description The pieces of puzzles
Closed away in the box
The pieces of lives lost
Regardless of cost
The pieces of me
Sat here without you
The pieces of loneliness
With nothing to do
The pieces of fortune
I'm waiting to reap
The pieces of dreams
Left only for sleep
The pieces of memories
Of those left behind
The pieces of "what if's"
That run through my mind
The pieces of right now
Of choices to make
The pieces of my future
Of chances to take
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Comments: 5

Plaugh [2011-08-16 01:05:38 +0000 UTC]

A fine poem. Your use of rhythm accentuates the second half of each pair. It was a pleasure to read.

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ch3shir3cat In reply to Plaugh [2011-08-16 20:31:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you! your comment was certainly a pleasure to read!

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Plaugh In reply to ch3shir3cat [2011-08-16 21:24:13 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome.

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killingursoulXx [2011-07-30 20:31:37 +0000 UTC]

Great!

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VielBlackheart22 [2011-07-25 19:34:22 +0000 UTC]

Very well written

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