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Published: 2011-09-26 04:18:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 860; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 2
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Description Ahiru spent all that afternoon at the barre. She went through the basics over and over, continuing long after her muscles ached and begged her to give it a rest. Anything, anything besides thinking about that....

She was still going at it, in fact, when the voice of her instructor greeted her with rare praise. "Miss Ahiru, this is quite a change! I see I've finally gotten through to you... !"

"Ah--!" she paused in the middle of lifting her leg in an arabesque behind her, not quite completing the pose and so making a rather awkward show. But Mr. Cat was not deterred.

"You have found your true motivation, haven't you? Could it be--could it be, you are working yourself to the bone, trying ardently to impress me, because you wish--"

"Mr. Cat," Ahiru interrupted, a pensive look on her face.

He looked a bit put out, but responded in a calmer tone than he'd had before, "... Yes, Miss Ahiru? A question for your teacher? Could it be about mm-mar--"

"Mr. Cat," she went on, as though he hadn't spoken, "is it... is it possible to love... more than one person at the same time?"

"Of course," he replied gravely. "Giselle allowed the affections of both Hilarion and Albrecht, after all. That was why the ending was so unfortunate."

Ahiru had sat down underneath the barre without quite realizing it. Her brow was furrowed, her face serious. "So, it's a bad thing, then. I knew that, but...."

"It is not so simple, Miss Ahiru," Mr. Cat began, but Ahiru was on her feet again. Her face had scrunched into a determined pout.

"It's definitely, definitely bad--it can't happen!"

And that was all she would say on the matter.
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Comments: 14

EmberEverdeen16 [2012-02-18 16:39:48 +0000 UTC]

That was great! Mr. Cat was awsome!

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chaiing In reply to EmberEverdeen16 [2012-02-18 17:34:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you think so!

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Kiyoko-mai [2011-09-26 22:34:05 +0000 UTC]

But in the end (as according to rabid Fakiru fangirls) she'll lose ^^
that thought makes me Smile~

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chaiing In reply to Kiyoko-mai [2011-09-27 03:23:51 +0000 UTC]

Haha, we can agree on that. XD

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Kiyoko-mai In reply to chaiing [2011-09-27 21:10:22 +0000 UTC]

indeed we can^^

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KatChan00 [2011-09-26 04:52:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I just love it to pieces! I adore the concept of her being confused by starting to think about Fakir more, even though she might not be fully in love yet!
So well written and perfectly in character~

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chaiing In reply to KatChan00 [2011-09-26 04:53:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad it makes sense, and I'm happy you liked it!

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Nanenna [2011-09-26 04:30:02 +0000 UTC]

I agree with Ahiru not having feelings for Fakir in show. She spends all of it completely devoted to Mytho, he was even the reason she went to the lake. But we also see how supportive she is of his love for Rue and willingness to let him go. We also see hints that she could be developing the beginnings of feelings for Fakir, given some time and distance from her crush on Mytho she totally could fall for Fakir.

Poor Ahiru, she's always so unsure and full of doubt. I want to hug her and tell her it's okay!

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chaiing In reply to Nanenna [2011-09-26 04:46:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm definitely not of the opinion that she had an active crush on Fakir at any point in the show. But I do think there was room for her to get ideas about it--and anyway, who doesn't get confused about their feelings, especially at that age?

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Nanenna In reply to chaiing [2011-09-26 05:53:47 +0000 UTC]

At that age confusion is your dominant feeling.

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amako-chan [2011-09-26 04:22:53 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhh! I really like the idea of her fighting with herself over her thoughts/emotions. That's a really clever way of taking the prompt!

...I almost want to count this as headcanon now. XD It really fits.

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chaiing In reply to amako-chan [2011-09-26 04:44:22 +0000 UTC]

Ahiru tends to waver between being conflicted about things and being stubborn in her beliefs, so I figure there's definitely room for her to have wavered a little about her feelings for Fakir.

I'm glad you think it works!

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mildmilly [2011-09-26 04:21:32 +0000 UTC]

...Oh my god you have Mr. Cat down so perfectly it's scary. Ahiru, too! It's so well written and asdfghjk of Ahiruuu ;-; Thanks so much for sharing, I'm so loving every entry you put up

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chaiing In reply to mildmilly [2011-09-26 04:42:58 +0000 UTC]

Mr. Cat is startlingly fun to write. XD

Thank you! I'm glad you're liking them!

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